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gamzey

July 12, 2025

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Free Time

My days is full l am going school and course than l am tried but sometimes l have a free time at the weekends l ussually take a rest this time apart from this l meeting my friend an we spend a nice time we visit a new place and we playing wolleyball. l am always reading a book for this l don't need extra free time but l am a lot of reading a book this weekend and sometimes l am going a picnic with my family l love free time because there are will do a lot of things .

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My days isare full. l am going school and, of course, thaen l am tried bired. But sometimes l have a free time aton the weekends. l ussually take a rest at this time a. Apart from this, l meeting my friend and we spend a nice time wtogether. We visit a new places and we playing w volleyball.

Be sure to use correct verb tenses and break up your sentences.

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gamzey

July 12, 2025

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l don't understand when l use "at" and "on"

My days isare full. l am going school and taking a course thanhence l am tried b. But sometimes l have asome free time at the weekends, so l ussually take a rest during this time a. Apart from this, l meeting my friend and we spend a nice time we, visit a new place and we playing w volleyball.

Try creating short sentences.

l am always reading a book for this as l don't needhave extra free time, but l am a lot of reading aread loads of book this weekend and s. Sometimes l am gohaving a picnic with my family, l love free time because there are will do a lot of things that I can do.

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gamzey

July 12, 2025

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Free Time


My days is full l am going school and course than l am tried but sometimes l have a free time at the weekends l ussually take a rest this time apart from this l meeting my friend an we spend a nice time we visit a new place and we playing wolleyball.


My days isare full. l am going school and taking a course thanhence l am tried b. But sometimes l have asome free time at the weekends, so l ussually take a rest during this time a. Apart from this, l meeting my friend and we spend a nice time we, visit a new place and we playing w volleyball.

Try creating short sentences.

My days isare full. l am going school and, of course, thaen l am tried bired. But sometimes l have a free time aton the weekends. l ussually take a rest at this time a. Apart from this, l meeting my friend and we spend a nice time wtogether. We visit a new places and we playing w volleyball.

Be sure to use correct verb tenses and break up your sentences.

l am always reading a book for this l don't need extra free time but l am a lot of reading a book this weekend and sometimes l am going a picnic with my family l love free time because there are will do a lot of things .


l am always reading a book for this as l don't needhave extra free time, but l am a lot of reading aread loads of book this weekend and s. Sometimes l am gohaving a picnic with my family, l love free time because there are will do a lot of things that I can do.

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