Oct. 29, 2021
Free time
The wether was awfule. The clouds were grey, was cold, it has been raining until at 5 p.m.
During this time I trained to play my guitar for 2 hours. Then I decided playing my favorite videogames.
By the time when the rain stopped and the sun appeared I had finished to play the videogames.
In five minutes my friend called me and proposed to go out and joined the team which was collected by him to play basketball against the team from the neaghbour district.
Basketball my favorite game and I surely gave my agreement.
The opponent team was strong but anyway we won by used an inteligent and a good tactic.
The wether was awfule.
The weather was awful.
The clouds were grey, was cold, it has been raining until at 5 p.m.
The clouds were grey, it was cold, and it had been raining since 5 p.m.
During this time I trained to play my guitar for 2 hours.
During this time I practiced playing my guitar.
Then I decided playing my favorite videogames.
Then I decided to play my favorite videogames.
By the time when the rain stopped and the sun appeared I had finished to play the videogames.
By the time the rain stopped and the sun appeared, I had finished playing the videogames.
In five minutes my friend called me and proposed to go out and joined the team which was collected by him to play basketball against the team from the neaghbour district.
Five minutes later my friend called me and suggested we go out and join the basketball team he formed and play against the team from the neighboring district.
Basketball my favorite game and I surely gave my agreement.
Basketball is my favorite sport, so I agreed.
The opponent team was strong but anyway we won by used an inteligent and a good tactic.
The opposing team was strong but we won anyway by using smart and well-played tactics.
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This is a great effort! Most of your mistakes will iron themselves out over time, especially if you put a lot of time into listening to spoken English.
Oct. 30, 2021
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The wether was awfule. The wether was awfule. The weather was awful. |
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The clouds were grey, was cold, it has been raining until at 5 p.m. The clouds were grey, was cold, it has been raining until at 5 p.m. The clouds were grey, it was cold, and it had been raining since 5 p.m. |
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During this time I trained to play my guitar for 2 hours. During this time I trained to play my guitar for 2 hours. During this time I practiced playing my guitar. |
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Then I decided playing my favorite videogames. Then I decided playing my favorite videogames. Then I decided to play my favorite videogames. |
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By the time when the rain stopped and the sun appeared I had finished to play the videogames. By the time when the rain stopped and the sun appeared I had finished to play the videogames. By the time the rain stopped and the sun appeared, I had finished playing the videogames. |
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In five minutes my friend called me and proposed to go out and joined the team which was collected by him to play basketball against the team from the neaghbour district. In five minutes my friend called me and proposed to go out and joined the team which was collected by him to play basketball against the team from the neaghbour district. Five minutes later my friend called me and suggested we go out and join the basketball team he formed and play against the team from the neighboring district. |
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Basketball my favorite game and I surely gave my agreement. Basketball my favorite game and I surely gave my agreement. Basketball is my favorite sport, so I agreed. |
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The opponent team was strong but anyway we won by used an inteligent and a good tactic. The opponent team was strong but anyway we won by used an inteligent and a good tactic. The opposing team was strong but we won anyway by using smart and well-played tactics. |
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