Nov. 17, 2020
I have practically ended school today. Officially, it ends on the forth of December, but I don't have classes until a week before that. I believe we aren't going to do anything useful that week, and nothing is going to be graded.
I'm glad I'm finally finishing high school. I'll have the longest holidays ever, as university usually starts on May (though I'm not very sure). This means I have at least five free months, which is great, but I don't quite know what to do with all that free time.
I don't have a hobby and I also don't do any sport. I'm often told I'm good at drawing, but being a perfectionist makes it very hard to enjoy it. I used to liked crafts when I was younger, so I thought of learning embroidery or knitting, though I'm not sure that I'll like it. I've been wanting to do charity work for a while now, but I don't think it possible due to the coronavirus and being underage. I also like baking, so I may try new recipes. The problem with baking is that it's going to be summer soon, so it will be really hot to use the oven (and not die in the attempt hahah).
However, I do have some plans like reading, tidying up my room, getting my driver's license and hanging out with friends. I also want to cut my hair short, though I know it's going to turn out awful. I know that if I don't do it, I'll regret it, so I'm trying to convince my mom to cut it.
Note: I realize the sentences lack linking, I'll work on it in future journals.
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I have practically endedalmost finished this semester of school today.
Officially, it ends on the fourth of December, but I don't have classes until a week before that.
I believe we aren't going to do anything useful that week, and nothing is going towill be graded.
What you wrote is correct, but this is more succinct.
I'm glad I'm finally finishing high school.
I'll have the longest holidays ever, as university usually starts oin May (though I'm not very sure).
This means I have at least five free months, which is great, but I don't quite know what to do with all that free time.
I don't have a hobby and I also don't do any sports.
Or "I don't have any hobbies and I don't play any sports."
I'm often told I'm good at drawing, but being a perfectionist makes it very hard to enjoy it.
I used to liked crafts when I was younger, so I thought of learning embroidery or knitting, though I'm not sure that I'll like it.
I've been wanting to do charity work for a while now, but I don't think it possible due to the coronavirus and being underage.
I also like baking, so I may try new recipes.
The problem with baking is that it's going to be summer soon, so it will be really hot to use the oven (and not die in the attempt hahah).
However, I do have some plans like reading, tidying up my room, getting my driver's license and hanging out with friends.
I also want to cut my hair short, though I know it's going to turn out awful.
I know that if I don't do it, I'll regret it, so I'm trying to convince my mom to cut it.
Note: I realize the sentences lack linking,connectors. I'll work on it in future journals.
I don't know, they looked pretty good to me!
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I have practically ended school today. I have |
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Officially, it ends on the forth of December, but I don't have classes until a week before that. Officially, it ends on the fourth of December, but I don't have classes until a week before that. |
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I believe we aren't going to do anything useful that week, and nothing is going to be graded. I believe we aren't going to do anything useful that week, and nothing What you wrote is correct, but this is more succinct. |
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I'm glad I'm finally finishing high school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'll have the longest holidays ever, as university usually starts on May (though I'm not very sure). I'll have the longest holidays ever, as university usually starts |
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This means I have at least five free months, which is great, but I don't quite know what to do with all that free time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't have a hobby and I also don't do any sport. I don't have a hobby and I also don't do any sports. Or "I don't have any hobbies and I don't play any sports." |
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I'm often told I'm good at drawing, but being a perfectionist makes it very hard to enjoy it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to liked crafts when I was younger, so I thought of learning embroidery or knitting, though I'm not sure that I'll like it. I used to like |
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I've been wanting to do charity work for a while now, but I don't think it possible due to the coronavirus and being underage. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also like baking, so I may try new recipes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The problem with baking is that it's going to be summer soon, so it will be really hot to use the oven (and not die in the attempt hahah). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I do have some plans like reading, tidying up my room, getting my driver's license and hanging out with friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also want to cut my hair short, though I know it's going to turn out awful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I know that if I don't do it, I'll regret it, so I'm trying to convince my mom to cut it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Note: I realize the sentences lack linking, I'll work on it in future journals. Note: I realize the sentences lack I don't know, they looked pretty good to me! |
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