July 10, 2024
Free gifts
Casually, in case there is free gifts, the consumers will be tempted to buy goods. However, free gifts may be reverse effect instead of selling goods. In fact, a survey shows that the consumers tend to estimate goods that will be gifted lower than its quality. Thus, the consumers also think that free gifts are not special at all. These thoughts can affect negative to sales, such as doubting about the rationality of the products’ price.
Thông thường, trong trường hợp có quà tặng miễn phí, người tiêu dùng sẽ bị cám dỗ nhiều hơn trong việc mua hàng. Tuy nhiên, đôi khi quà tặng miễn phí có thể có tác dụng ngược thay vì giúp bán hàng. Trên thực tế, trong một cuộc khảo sát, người tiêu dùng có xu hướng định giá hàng hóa được tặng làm quà thấp hơn so với chất lượng của chúng. Như vậy, người tiêu dùng cũng nghĩ rằng đồ vật miễn phí không có giá trị gì đặc biệt. Suy nghĩ này có thể ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến việc bán hàng, chẳng hạn như nghi ngờ tính hợp lý của giá sản phẩm.
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Thus, the consumers also think that free gifts are not special at all.
These thoughts can affect negative to sales, such as doubting about the rationality of the products’ price, can negatively affect sales.
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Amazing writing, well done!
July 29, 2024
Thank you for your advice, gabriella^^
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I don't know why casually was there, it doesn't make sense to start this sentence that way
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Using "presume" instead of "estimate" might also be a good choice. This is a tricky sentence.
These thoughts can affect sales negative to salesly, such as by customers doubting about the rationality of the products’ price.
Changed negative to an adjective, and you have to add the subject of what you are talking about, which is why I added "customers".
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You did a great job, and only had a few mistakes with sentence structure. Very to the point and formal.
July 29, 2024
Thank you so much, ViridCanine!^^
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Casually, in case there is free gifts, the consumers will be tempted to buy goods.
I don't know why casually was there, it doesn't make sense to start this sentence that way
companies might talk about selling 'goods' but we would usually say that consumers buy 'products'. |
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However, free gifts may be reverse effect instead of selling goods. However, free gifts may However, free gifts m |
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In fact, a survey shows that the consumers tend to estimate goods that will be gifted lower than its quality. In fact, a survey shows that the consumers tend to estimate Using "presume" instead of "estimate" might also be a good choice. This is a tricky sentence.
'In fact' isn't needed as you've already said 'however'. |
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Thus, the consumers also think that free gifts are not special at all. Thus, |
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These thoughts can affect negative to sales, such as doubting about the rationality of the products’ price. These thoughts can affect sales negative Changed negative to an adjective, and you have to add the subject of what you are talking about, which is why I added "customers". These thoughts |
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