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Nov. 17, 2022

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Free expression

Why free expression is deserved keeping. However this is not written in Japanese law. This is because Japanese people living there have to think on their own and express by their own words. If you cannot express what free expression is , what common benefit is, what democracy is, and so on, you could not pursuade some people-say that these law are not deserved keeping.

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WhyThe right to free expression is deserved keeping.worthy of being preserved,

Hhowever this, such an idea is not written into Japanese law.

This is becausDespite that, the Japanese people living there havwithin Japan need to be able to think on their own and express bythemselves using their own words.

If you cannot express whatWithout being able to communicate through the right to free expression is , what a common benefit is, what democracy is, and so on, you cwould not pursuade some people-say that these law are not deserved keepingbe afforded the very means by which you would exercise an attempt of persuasion in favor of their abolition.

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Since were talking about pretty complicated subject here, I decided that it would be best if I changed the sentences to be full on native level.

I see that you're intent is to point out the hypocrisy of those arguing against you, so I focused on that part of things.

Free eExpression

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Why fFree expression is deservedworth keeping.

However tThis is not written into Japanese law, however.

This is because Japanese people living there have to think on their own and express byuse their own words to express themselves.

If you cannot expressdescribe what free expression is , what the common benefit iss are, what democracy is, and so on, you could annot puersuade some people-say into thinking that these laws are not deservedworth keeping.

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よく書けています!

Free expression


Free eExpression

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Why free expression is deserved keeping.


Why fFree expression is deservedworth keeping.

WhyThe right to free expression is deserved keeping.worthy of being preserved,

However this is not written in Japanese law.


However tThis is not written into Japanese law, however.

Hhowever this, such an idea is not written into Japanese law.

This is because Japanese people living there have to think on their own and express by their own words.


This is because Japanese people living there have to think on their own and express byuse their own words to express themselves.

This is becausDespite that, the Japanese people living there havwithin Japan need to be able to think on their own and express bythemselves using their own words.

If you cannot express what free expression is , what common benefit is, what democracy is, and so on, you could not pursuade some people-say that these law are not deserved keeping.


If you cannot expressdescribe what free expression is , what the common benefit iss are, what democracy is, and so on, you could annot puersuade some people-say into thinking that these laws are not deservedworth keeping.

If you cannot express whatWithout being able to communicate through the right to free expression is , what a common benefit is, what democracy is, and so on, you cwould not pursuade some people-say that these law are not deserved keepingbe afforded the very means by which you would exercise an attempt of persuasion in favor of their abolition.

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