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mohammed_ouali

July 20, 2025

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France bans smoking for tobacco-free generation

France has banned smoking in public places like parks and beaches , and who light up a cigarette in this places are breaking the law , the france's minister of health that this ban is to protect children right to breath clean air , the french population are happy with this ban , and want to apply it in more public places like caffes and restaurants , they want to create a tobacco-free generation and see their childreb grow healthier .

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France bBans sSmoking for ta Tobacco-fFree gGeneration

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France has banned smoking in public places (like / such as) parks and beaches , and those who light up a cigarette in thisese places are now breaking the law , the f. France's mMinister of hHealth stated that this ban is to protect children's right to breathe clean air , t. The fFrench population areis happy with this ban , and want to apply it in (more / additional) public places (like / such as) caffes and restaurants , t. They want to create a tobacco-free generation and see their childrebn grow healthier .

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Great job.

I certainly hope France soon bans cigarettes and vapes from restaurants entirely (I am speaking about outdoor seating). Often, the smoke pours inside and it ruins the entire experience for those of us who loathe being around smokers.

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mohammed_ouali

July 20, 2025

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Thank you

France bans smoking for tobacco-free generation


France bBans sSmoking for ta Tobacco-fFree gGeneration

Title capitalization rules

France has banned smoking in public places like parks and beaches , and who light up a cigarette in this places are breaking the law , the france's minister of health that this ban is to protect children right to breath clean air , the french population are happy with this ban , and want to apply it in more public places like caffes and restaurants , they want to create a tobacco-free generation and see their childreb grow healthier .


France has banned smoking in public places (like / such as) parks and beaches , and those who light up a cigarette in thisese places are now breaking the law , the f. France's mMinister of hHealth stated that this ban is to protect children's right to breathe clean air , t. The fFrench population areis happy with this ban , and want to apply it in (more / additional) public places (like / such as) caffes and restaurants , t. They want to create a tobacco-free generation and see their childrebn grow healthier .

Since this is a rather formal text, I suggested two alternatives that are better suited for a professional tone (such as and additional).

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