yesterday
I’m proud of my sister.
I’m not sure whether having a close relationship with your cousins is common, but that’s how it is for me. I really enjoy talking with her about everything, especially after we haven’t spoken for a while.
Today she surprised me by saying that she’s writing a book! This news made me happy and proud at the same time. Not long ago, she was going through an identity crisis that had been frustrating her for quite some time. I’m so glad she’s doing better now.
Actually, it was only a matter of time. She has been an avid reader since childhood, and now it’s wonderful that she has found herself not only in reading but also in writing.
I’m proud of my sister.
I’m not sure whether having a close relationship with your cousinsiblings is common, but that’s how it is for me.
I think you might mean siblings here? As you go on to write the whole text in the context of your sister.
I really enjoy talking with her about everything, especially after we haven’t spoken for a while.
Today she surprised me by saying that she’s writing a book!
This news made me happy and proud at the same time.
Not long ago, she was going through an identity crisis that had been frustrating her for quite some time.
I’m so glad she’s doing better now.
Actually, it was only a matter of time.
She has been an avid reader since childhood, and now it’s wonderful that she has found herself not only in reading but also in writing.
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Lovely text! Nicely written also :)
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I’m not sure whether having a close relationship with your cousins is common, but that’s how it is for me. I’m not sure whether having a close relationship with your I think you might mean siblings here? As you go on to write the whole text in the context of your sister. |
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I really enjoy talking with her about everything, especially after we haven’t spoken for a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today she surprised me by saying that she’s writing a book! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This news made me happy and proud at the same time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not long ago, she was going through an identity crisis that had been frustrating her for quite some time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m so glad she’s doing better now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Actually, it was only a matter of time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She has been an avid reader since childhood, and now it’s wonderful that she has found herself not only in reading but also in writing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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