April 24, 2025
It’s a sunny day. After a short shopping, together with my nephews and my wife will go in the park. We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults and the boys will eat ice cream. A walking for a hour will be good for charged our batteries.
Walking in the park
It’s a sunny day.
After a short shopping, togetherrip/After a bit of shopping, I will go with my nephews and my wife will go into the park.
After a short shopping trip/After a bit of shopping, I will go with my nephews and my wife to the park.
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults(for the adults, the boys will eat ice-cream). - or "the adults will drink coffee and the boys will eat ice -cream."
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee (for the adults, the boys will eat ice-cream). - or "the adults will drink coffee and the boys will eat ice-cream"
A wWalking for an hour will be good forto charged our batteries.
Walking for an hour will be good to charge our batteries.
It’s a sunny day.
After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews and, my wife and I will go in the park.
After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews, my wife and I will go in the park.
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adultsthe adults will have coffee and the boys will eat ice cream.
We’ll walk around the lake, the adults will have coffee and the boys will eat ice cream.
Better: we'll take a walk around the lake...
To have coffee implies drinking coffee and is how we'd typically express this.
A walking for a hourn hour walk will be good for chargeding our batteries.
An hour walk will be good for charging our batteries.
Alternative: Walking for an hour...
But you can't say "A walking"
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After a short shopping, together with my nephews and my wife will go in the park.
After a short shopping
After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews |
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We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults and the boys will eat ice cream.
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee
We’ll walk around the lake, Better: we'll take a walk around the lake... To have coffee implies drinking coffee and is how we'd typically express this. |
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A walking for a hour will be good for charged our batteries.
A Alternative: Walking for an hour... But you can't say "A walking" |
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