Feb. 25, 2024
When it comes to March third coming, it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dolls festival in English. Usually, when a girl was born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to the healthy growth of the girl's life.
My daughter grew up enough and already lelt our house. Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because they're so beautiful.
However, it's very hard work to take out a lot of boxes from strage room. In the end, the
number of completed set of dolls are fifteen but I displayed seven of them. If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it must need whole one room.
I cleaned the space of the top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet. Then I put on the emperor and the empress. After that the room dramatically beautiful. I felt like I did something good because I omitted the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's good tradition now.
I might display them every year.
ひな祭り
3月3日といえばひな祭りです。普通は女の子が生まれると、親は子供が健康に育つように願いをこめて、お雛様を買います。
私の娘は大きくなって家を出ていきました。娘はいないのですが、今回自分のためにお雛様を飾ってみました。
でも、納戸からたくさんの箱を取り出して飾り付けるのは大変な仕事です。結局、全部で15体のうち7体を取り出しました。もし全部出していたら、一部屋使ってしまいます。
そこで、本棚の上をきれいにして、赤い布を敷いてお雛様を飾りました。部屋はパッと明るくきれいになりました。少々お人形を減らしましたが、私は日本の伝統を守ったと、とても良い事をした気分になりました。
来年も飾ろうと思います。
Hinamatsuri
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If I displayed the seven-tiered set of dolls, I would need a whole new room.
I cleaned the space of then top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet on it.
I cleaned the space on top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet on it.
Then I put on the emperor and the empress on it.
Then I put the emperor and the empress on it.
After that the room dramatically beautiful.
I felt like I did something good becauseeven though I omitted the decorations, but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's gooda good Japanese tradition now.
I felt I did something good even though I omitted the decorations, but I'm keeping a good Japanese tradition.
I might display them every year.
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Usually, when a girl is born, the parents purchase a set of Hina dolls and pray for healthy growth in the girl's life.
My daughter grew up enough and already lelhas already grown up and left our house.
My daughter has already grown up and left our house.
Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because they're so beautiful.
Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them because they're so beautiful.
However, it's verya lot of hard work to take out a lot ofll of the boxes from the storage room.
However, it's a lot of hard work to take out all of the boxes from the storage room.
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In total, the number of completed set of dolls is fifteen, but I displayed seven of them.
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If I displayed the seven-tiered set of dolls, it would need a whole room.
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I cleaned on top of the bookshelf and put a red cloth on it.
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Then I put the emperor and the empress on it.
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Instantly, the room looked so beautiful.
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I felt like I did something good because, even though I omitted some of the decorations, I'm continuing a good Japanese tradition.
I might display them every year.
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My daughter grew up and has now left our house.
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Even though she isn't here, I decided to display the dolls as they're so beautiful.
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However, it's a lot of hard work to take out all the boxes from storage room.
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In the end, the
number of completed set of dolls were fifteen and I displayed seven of them.
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If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it would need a whole room.
I cleaned the space of then top of the bookshelf and setplaced a red carpet.
I cleaned the space on top of the bookshelf and placed a red carpet.
Then I put on the emperor and the empress.
After that the room dramatically beautiful.
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I felt like I did something good even though I omitted the decorations and I thought I'm continuing to protect Japan's good traditions.
I might display them every year.
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March third is coming, so it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, Doll's festival in English.
While some people may call it that, I most people actually we just use the Japanese name as well (similar to words like Sumo it's better than trying to translate it) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hinamatsuri
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My daughter has grown up enough left the house already.
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If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it would need a whole room.
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I cleaned the space on the top of the bookshelf and spread a red carpet on top.
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Instantly, the room felt brighter and more beautiful.
This is a little closer to what you wrote in Japanese.
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I felt good because although I omitted some of the decorations but I felt like I'm protecting one of Japan's good tradition now.
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I might do this every year.
This is a different sentence but it fits the feeling a little bit better! Sometimes simpler is better.
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When it comes to March third coming, it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dolls festival in English.
While some people may call it that, I most people actually we just use the Japanese name as well (similar to words like Sumo it's better than trying to translate it) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hinamatsuri
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