July 4, 2025
Fourth post
Hello everyone!!!
Today, was so fast. In the morning I went to doctor. Befero I came back home and did homework. And practice my English.
Fourth post
Hello everyone!!!
Today, was so fastbusy.
In the morning I went to the doctor.
BeferoThen I came back home and did my homework.
And practiced my English.
Fourth pPost
titles are often written in "title case"
Hello everyone!!!
Today, wasent so fast.
"went" or "went by" sound more natural
In the morning, I went to doctor.
The comma may not be strictly necessary, but it indicates a natural pause.
BeferoThen I came back home and, did homework., and practiced my English.
Or you could say
"In the morning, I went to the doctor before I came back home to do homework."
And practice my English.
added on to the previous sentence to make it a complete series with similar ideas written closer together
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Nice job with this short paragraph. It is easy to understand and only contains some minor things.
Fourth post
Hello everyone!!!
Today, was so fast.
More natural: Today went by so fast.
In the morning I went to the doctor.
Beferoore that (or "Earlier"), I came back home and did homework.
And practiced my English.
Today, wasent by so fast.
Befero I came backWhen I got home andI did my homework. and practiced English.
Not sure if you mean "When I returned home I did my homework" or if you mean "I did my homework before returning home"
And practice my English.
(put this this with the above sentence)
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Today, was so fast. Today, was so fast. More natural: Today went by so fast. Today Today "went" or "went by" sound more natural Today, was |
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In the morning I went to doctor. In the morning I went to the doctor. In the morning, I went to doctor. The comma may not be strictly necessary, but it indicates a natural pause. In the morning I went to the doctor. |
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Befero I came back home and did homework. Bef
Not sure if you mean "When I returned home I did my homework" or if you mean "I did my homework before returning home"
Or you could say "In the morning, I went to the doctor before I came back home to do homework."
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And practice my English. And practiced my English.
(put this this with the above sentence)
added on to the previous sentence to make it a complete series with similar ideas written closer together And practiced my English. |
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