May 11, 2022
Four benefits of an entomophagous diet
The first benefit is that curiosity can be satisfied. Eating insects should be a rare experience, and it can be a topic of conversation when talking with friends.
The second benefit is that they are nutritionally rich. Insects contain a lot of protein, which is useful in areas suffering from famine. Another advantage is that insects can be eaten almost entirely, whereas cattle and other animals can only eat the meat part.
They are also rich in vitamins, minerals and fibre.
The third benefit is that it is environmentally friendly. Firstly, insects take less than a month to grow and ship, depending on the species. Cattle, however, take several years to turn into a commodity. Insects require far less food to obtain the same amount of protein.
Furthermore, cattle emit greenhouse gases, while insects do not. This helps prevent global warming.
The last benefit I would like to mention is the cultural significance. As Japanese food has been inscribed on UNESCO's list of intangible cultural heritage, food culture is naturally of great importance in the world, and it is good to preserve the remaining culture of insect eating in rural areas.
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Four benefits of an entomophagous diet
You could add "The" at the start but it is not required :)
The first benefit is that curiosity can be satisfied.
Eating insects should be a rare experience, and it can be a topic of conversation when talking with friends.
The second benefit is that they are nutritionally rich.
Insects contain a lot of protein, which is useful in areas suffering from famine.
Another advantage is that insects can be eaten almost entirely, whereas, with cattle and other animals, you can only eat the meat parts.
They are also rich in vitamins, minerals and fibre.
The third benefit is that it is environmentally friendly.
Firstly, insects take less than a month to grow and ship, depending on the species.
Cattle, however, take several years to turn into a commodity.
or "take several years to become fully grown"
Insects require far less food to obtain the same amount of protein.
or "far less feeding"
Furthermore, cattle emit greenhouse gases, while insects do not.
This helps prevent global warming.
The last benefit I would like to mention is the cultural significance.
As Japanese food has been inscribadded ton UNESCO's list of intangible cultural heritage, f. Food culture is naturally of great importance into the world, and it is good to preserve the remaining culture of insect -eating in rural areas.
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Excellent writing! It was fascinating to read and now I want to eat some insects.
The first benefit is that your curiosity can be satisfied.
Insects contain a lot of protein, which is useful in areas which suffering from famine.
Another advantage is that the entirety of the insects can be eaten almost entirely, whereas with cattle and other animals canwe only eat the meat part.
TheyInsects are also rich in vitamins, minerals and fibre.
As Japanese food has been inscribadded ton UNESCO's list of intangible cultural heritage, food culture is naturally of great importance in the world, and it is good to preserve the remaining culture of insect eating in rural areas.
"Inscribed" is not incorrect at all, just a little formal!
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This is really well-written, hard to find any errors! I have learned a new word too ("entomophagous") :)
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The second benefit is that they are nutritionally rich. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another advantage is that insects can be eaten almost entirely, whereas cattle and other animals can only eat the meat part. Another advantage is that the entirety of the insect Another advantage is that insects can be eaten almost entirely, whereas, with cattle and other animals, you can only eat the meat parts. |
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They are also rich in vitamins, minerals and fibre.
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The third benefit is that it is environmentally friendly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Firstly, insects take less than a month to grow and ship, depending on the species. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Cattle, however, take several years to turn into a commodity. Cattle, however, take several years to turn into a commodity. or "take several years to become fully grown" |
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Insects require far less food to obtain the same amount of protein. Insects require far less food to obtain the same amount of protein. or "far less feeding" |
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Furthermore, cattle emit greenhouse gases, while insects do not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This helps prevent global warming. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The last benefit I would like to mention is the cultural significance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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