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Tina_

Aug. 22, 2023

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Formal letter connected to the World Heritage Committee II.

In my opinion the new site offers habitat for several plants like such as trees, flowers and bushes. Additionally, mushrooms can also occur there.

Besides that, I have a personal memory connected to the site and I would like to share that. My mother's grandmother lived with her husband the neighbourhood of this forest years ago. They liked the birds, especially the owls and they always wanted one. In this way, indirectly, they have now received it.

Thank you so much your selfless movement.

Yours faithfully,

Clara Clein

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In my opinion tThe new site offersprovides a habitat for several plants like --such as trees, flowers, and bushes.

Best writers never say "In my opinion" because if you are writing it, we know it is your opinion.

Additionally, mushrooms can also occurgrow there.

Besidesyond that, I have a personalfamily memory connected to the site andthat I would like to share that.

My mother's grandmother lived with her husband in the neighbourhood of this forest years ago.

They liked the birds, especially the owls and t. They always wanted onean owl.

Thank you so much your selfless movementwork.

or selfless actions.

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dancingtrees

Aug. 23, 2023

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Also, just say "Letter to the World Heritage Committee."

In my opinion, the new site offers a habitat for several types of plants like such as trees, flowers, and bushes.

Additionally, mushrooms can also occurgrow there.

MYears ago, my mother's grandmother lived with her husband in the neighbourhood of this forest years agothat's near the forest.

They liked the birds, especially the owls, and they always wanted one.

In this way, indirectly, they havNow they can continue to enjoy the now received itls for years to come.

i'm not exactly sure what you were referring to here. but i'm guessing you mean they kind of have their own owl now thanks to this site being preserved?

"for years to come" means for a long time

Thank you so much your selfless movementcommitment to preserving nature.

Yours faithfully, Clara Clein

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dancingtrees

Aug. 23, 2023

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Also, just say "Letter to the World Heritage Committee."

Formal letter connected to the World Heritage Committee II.

In my opinion the new site offers a habitat for several plants like such as trees, flowers and bushes.

"like" and "such as" mean the same thing. Like is informal, and such as is formal. You don't want to use both because it can be redundant. Think about the context of what you're writing and move forward with one choice from there :)

Additionally, mushrooms can also occurgrow there.

Same thing here. "additionally" and "also" mean the same thing. Additionally is usually more formal, and also is informal. Again, try to consider context then choose one to use.

Besides that, I have a personal memory connected to the site and I would like to share that.

My mother's grandmother lived with her husband in the neighbourhoodarea of this forest years ago.

They liked the birds, especially the owls and they always wanted one.

In this way, indirectly, they have now received it.

Thank you so much your selfless movement.

Yours faithfully, Clara Clein

Formal letter connected to the World Heritage Committee II.


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In my opinion the new site offers habitat for several plants like such as trees, flowers and bushes.


In my opinion the new site offers a habitat for several plants like such as trees, flowers and bushes.

"like" and "such as" mean the same thing. Like is informal, and such as is formal. You don't want to use both because it can be redundant. Think about the context of what you're writing and move forward with one choice from there :)

In my opinion, the new site offers a habitat for several types of plants like such as trees, flowers, and bushes.

In my opinion tThe new site offersprovides a habitat for several plants like --such as trees, flowers, and bushes.

Best writers never say "In my opinion" because if you are writing it, we know it is your opinion.

Additionally, mushrooms can also occur there.


Additionally, mushrooms can also occurgrow there.

Same thing here. "additionally" and "also" mean the same thing. Additionally is usually more formal, and also is informal. Again, try to consider context then choose one to use.

Additionally, mushrooms can also occurgrow there.

Additionally, mushrooms can also occurgrow there.

Besides that, I have a personal memory connected to the site and I would like to share that.


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Besidesyond that, I have a personalfamily memory connected to the site andthat I would like to share that.

My mother's grandmother lived with her husband the neighbourhood of this forest years ago.


My mother's grandmother lived with her husband in the neighbourhoodarea of this forest years ago.

MYears ago, my mother's grandmother lived with her husband in the neighbourhood of this forest years agothat's near the forest.

My mother's grandmother lived with her husband in the neighbourhood of this forest years ago.

They liked the birds, especially the owls and they always wanted one.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They liked the birds, especially the owls, and they always wanted one.

They liked the birds, especially the owls and t. They always wanted onean owl.

In this way, indirectly, they have now received it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this way, indirectly, they havNow they can continue to enjoy the now received itls for years to come.

i'm not exactly sure what you were referring to here. but i'm guessing you mean they kind of have their own owl now thanks to this site being preserved? "for years to come" means for a long time

Thank you so much your selfless movement.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you so much your selfless movementcommitment to preserving nature.

Thank you so much your selfless movementwork.

or selfless actions.

Yours faithfully, Clara Clein


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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