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vegerle

Oct. 17, 2022

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Formal letter

Dear Sirs,

We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets.

We investigated the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed description and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions.

Yours sincerely,
Ms Nancy Oliver
Purchase department


We have a homework to write a formal letter, please could you check if everything is ok, thank you))

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Formal letter

Dear Sirs,

This is a bit old fashioned and is nowadays more associated with a style used only by non-native English speakers. It's appropriate to use this if you are writing a letter using an old fashioned style, but if this is a modern day email to a department you do not have an existing relationship with, you can start the email with "To whom it may concern," or simply "Hello,".

We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students, such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets.

We investigatedtook a look through the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed descriptions and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions.

Web-site is non-standard, so it's better to use the more standard spelling in a formal letter.
Catalog and catalogue are both acceptable spellings, but since you used catalog first you should be consistent.

Yours sincerely,

Ms Nancy Oliver

Purchase department

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vegerle

Oct. 18, 2022

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Purchase department

Thank you so much for your correction and especially for comments!!!

Formal letter


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Dear Sirs,


Dear Sirs,

This is a bit old fashioned and is nowadays more associated with a style used only by non-native English speakers. It's appropriate to use this if you are writing a letter using an old fashioned style, but if this is a modern day email to a department you do not have an existing relationship with, you can start the email with "To whom it may concern," or simply "Hello,".

We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets.


We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students, such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets.

We investigated the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed description and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions.


We investigatedtook a look through the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed descriptions and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions.

Web-site is non-standard, so it's better to use the more standard spelling in a formal letter. Catalog and catalogue are both acceptable spellings, but since you used catalog first you should be consistent.

Yours sincerely,


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Ms Nancy Oliver


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Purchase department


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