Oct. 17, 2022
Dear Sirs,
We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets.
We investigated the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed description and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions.
Yours sincerely,
Ms Nancy Oliver
Purchase department
We have a homework to write a formal letter, please could you check if everything is ok, thank you))
Formal letter
Dear Sirs,
This is a bit old fashioned and is nowadays more associated with a style used only by non-native English speakers. It's appropriate to use this if you are writing a letter using an old fashioned style, but if this is a modern day email to a department you do not have an existing relationship with, you can start the email with "To whom it may concern," or simply "Hello,".
We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students, such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets.
We investigatedtook a look through the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed descriptions and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions.
Web-site is non-standard, so it's better to use the more standard spelling in a formal letter.
Catalog and catalogue are both acceptable spellings, but since you used catalog first you should be consistent.
Yours sincerely,
Ms Nancy Oliver
Purchase department
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Dear Sirs, Dear Sirs, This is a bit old fashioned and is nowadays more associated with a style used only by non-native English speakers. It's appropriate to use this if you are writing a letter using an old fashioned style, but if this is a modern day email to a department you do not have an existing relationship with, you can start the email with "To whom it may concern," or simply "Hello,". |
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We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets. We are looking for a new supplier for different kinds of medical supplies for our students, such as phonendoscopes, stethoscopes, neurological hammers and some other diagnostic sets. |
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We investigated the online catalog on your web-site properly and would be pleased if you could send us a complete catalogue with detailed description and prices as well as delivery and payment terms and conditions. We Web-site is non-standard, so it's better to use the more standard spelling in a formal letter. Catalog and catalogue are both acceptable spellings, but since you used catalog first you should be consistent. |
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Ms Nancy Oliver This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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