May 14, 2023
Formal Email 9
To whom it may concern,
Following your recent notice email, I am writing to express my thoughts on the last change in the next club meeting. First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude for informing us beforehand. However, I must confess to being rather disappointed by the lack of justification from Mr. David regarding his absence from the event. In this sense, I would like you to give us further information concerning this matter. As you may know, the club has been requesting the attendance of Mr. Prince for a long time, and this news has been quite difficult to accept. In my opinion, it would be preferable to postpone the event rather than cancel it entirely. Therefore, I would like to request a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this matter further. I hope that we can reach a reasonable agreement soon. Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Sergio
Formal Email 9
To whom it may concern,
Following your recent notice email, I am writing to express my thoughts on the last change in the next club meeting.
First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude for informing us beforehand.
However, I must confess to being rather disappointed by the lack of justification from Mr. David regarding his absence from the event.
In this sense, I would like youTherefore, I'd appreciate it if you would be able to give us further information concerningabout this matter.
You can probably use "in this sense" if you'd like, but I think another transition word might be better ("therefore" might not necessarily be the best one here, though).
As you may know, the club has been requesting the attendance of Mr.
Prince for a long time, and this news has unfortunately been quite difficult to accept.
"unfortunately" might make it seem more polite, but I'm not quite sure, lol.
In my opinion, it would be preferable to postpone the event rather than cancel it entirely.
Therefore, I would like to request a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this matter further.
I hope that we can reach a reasonable agreement soon.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Sergio
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Really well written :)
May 18, 2023
Thanks! :´)
Formal Email 9
To wWhom iIt mMay cConcern,
I was always taught to capitalize this.
FollowRegarding your recent notice email, I am writing to express my thoughts on the latest change into the next club meeting.
First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude for informing us beforehand.
However, I must confess, however, to being rather disappointed by the lack of justification from Mr. David regarding his absence from the event.
In this sense, I would like you to give us further information concerningabout this matter.
As you may know, the club has been requesting the attendance of Mr.
Prince for a long time, and this news has been quite difficult to accept.
In my opinion, it would be preferable to postpone the event rather than cancel it entirely.
Therefore, I would like to request a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this matter further.
I hope that we can reach a reasonable agreement soon.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Sergio
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Good work!
Formal Email 9
To whom it may concern,
First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude for informing us beforehand.
However, I must confess to being rather disappointed by the lack of justification from Mr. David regarding his absence from the event.
Is David his last name? If it's only his first name we would never use the MR. if it's his last name, then this sentence is correct
In this sense, I would like you toappreciate if you could give us further information concerning this matter.
This is just more natural.
Prince for a long time, and this news has been quite difficult to accept.
In my opinion, it would be preferable to postpone the event rather than cancel it entirely.
Therefore, I would like to request a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this matter further.
I hope that we can reach a reasonable agreement soon.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Sergio
May 18, 2023
Thanks a lot!
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