May 1, 2023
Formal Email 5
Dear Club Secretary,
I am contacting you regarding your recent email.
First and foremost, I am very sorry to hear about the cancellation of Gordon Ramsay's cooking show due to conflicting interests. It is a terrible shame that we will not be able to witness one of his cooking master classes.
Secondly, I must confess to being bitterly disappointed with the solution you have given us in return. We expected an incredible experience, nevertheless, an event using one of Mr. Ramsay's cookery books instead of the man himself is an insult to the cooking club. To make matters worse, you have not given us any option to get a refund.
To solve this situation, it seems only fair that you should offer a full refund for those who do not wish to attend the event.
Additionally, I strongly recommend that the organization should hire another famous chef.
Thank you very much for your consideration and time in this matter. I hope to hear back from you at your earliest convenience and that we will come to a reasonable agreement.
Yours faithfully,
Sergio
Formal Email 5
Dear Club Secretary,
I am contacting you regarding your recent email.
First and foremost, I am very sorry to hear about the cancellation of Gordon Ramsay's cooking show due to conflicting interests.
It is a terrible shame that we will not be able to witnesssee one of his cooking master classes.
"Witness" is a strong word and sounds funny here to me. Usually, we witness a crime or earth-shattering event.
Secondly, I must confess to being bitterly disappointed with the solution you have given us in return.
We expected an incredible experience, nevertheless,but an event using one of Mr. Ramsay's cookery books instead of the man himself is an insult to the cooking club.
To make matters worse, you have not given us any option to get a refund.
To resolve this situation, it seems only fair that you should offer a full refund forto those who do not wish to attend the event.
Additionally, I strongly recommend that the organization should hire another famous chef.
Thank you very much for your consideration and time in this matter.
I hope to hear back from you at your earliest convenience and that we will come to a reasonable agreement.
Yours faithfulSincerely,
I've never seen anyone use "faithfully" in the US.
Sergio
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First and foremost, I am very sorry to hear about the cancellation of Gordon Ramsay's cooking show due to conflicting interests. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is a terrible shame that we will not be able to witness one of his cooking master classes. It is a terrible shame that we will not be able to "Witness" is a strong word and sounds funny here to me. Usually, we witness a crime or earth-shattering event. |
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Secondly, I must confess to being bitterly disappointed with the solution you have given us in return. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We expected an incredible experience, nevertheless, an event using one of Mr. Ramsay's cookery books instead of the man himself is an insult to the cooking club. We expected an incredible experience, We expected an incredible experience, |
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To make matters worse, you have not given us any option to get a refund. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To solve this situation, it seems only fair that you should offer a full refund for those who do not wish to attend the event. To resolve this situation, it seems only fair that you should offer a full refund |
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Additionally, I strongly recommend that the organization should hire another famous chef. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you very much for your consideration and time in this matter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope to hear back from you at your earliest convenience and that we will come to a reasonable agreement. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yours faithfully,
I've never seen anyone use "faithfully" in the US. |
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