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sergio

April 28, 2023

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(Sorry to write about the same topic all the time, but I need to practise it for my language test >.<)

Dear Mr. Papyrus,
My name is Sergio, and I am an old member of the club. I am writing in reply to the recent events at the club. I, in the name of all members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking. I believe that the last decisions on annual budgets will do more harm than good. Therefore, I wondered if we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonably. Additionally, I do not agree with the new T-shirt prices. I think that such prices are neither attractive nor affordable for many people, especially in the current economic crisis in the country. Be that as it may, Í hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest convenience. Thank you very much for your time and consideration on this matter. I hope this will be taken into consideration and to hear back from you soon.
Kind regards,
Sergio

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(Sorry to write about the same topic all the time, but I need to practise it for my language test >.<)

There is no better way to prepare than with practice! :)

I am writing in replyto discuss to the recent events at the club.

I, in the name of all the other members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.

I believe that the lasrecent decisions on annual budgets will do more harm than good.

Therefore, I wondered if we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonablycome to a reasonable agreement.

I think that suchthe prices are neither attractive nor affordable for many peopleotential customers, especially in the current economic crisis in the country.

Be that as it may, ÍI hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest convenience.

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Great work! Only very small tweaks to sound more "natural" :)

Formal Email 4

(Sorry to write about the same topic all the time, but I need to practise it for my language test >.<)

Dear Mr. Papyrus,

My name is Sergio, and I am an old member of the club.

I am writing in reply to thesponse to recent events at the club.

I, ion the namebehalf of all members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.

I believe that the latest decisions on the annual budgets will do more harm than good.

Therefore, I wondered ifwhether we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonably.

Additionally, I do not agree with the new T-shirt prices.

I think that such prices are neither attractive nor affordable for many people, especially during the current economic crisis in the country.

Be that as it may, ÍI hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest conveniencesoon.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration onwith this matter.

I hope this will be taken into consideration and to hear back from you soon.

You already used "consideration" in the previous sentence so it sounds redundant to me to use it again here.

Kind regards,

Sergio

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Well done!

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sergio

April 29, 2023

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Thank you very much once again!

Formal Email 4

(Sorry to write about the same topic all the time, but I need to practise it for my language test >.<)

Dear Mr. Papyrus,

My name is Sergio, and I am an old member of the club.

I am writing in reply to the recent events at the club.

I, in the name of all members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.

Therefore, I wondered if we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonably.

Additionally, I do not agree with the new T-shirt prices.

Be that as it may, ÍI hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest convenience.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration on this matter.

I hope this will be taken into consideration and to hear back from you soon.

Kind regards,

Sergio

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sergio

April 29, 2023

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thanks!

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There is no better way to prepare than with practice! :)

Dear Mr. Papyrus,


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My name is Sergio, and I am an old member of the club.


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I am writing in reply to the recent events at the club.


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I am writing in reply to thesponse to recent events at the club.

I am writing in replyto discuss to the recent events at the club.

I, in the name of all members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.


I, in the name of all members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.

I, ion the namebehalf of all members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.

I, in the name of all the other members, would like to express my disappointment with the direction the club's management is taking.

I believe that the last decisions on annual budgets will do more harm than good.


I believe that the latest decisions on the annual budgets will do more harm than good.

I believe that the lasrecent decisions on annual budgets will do more harm than good.

Therefore, I wondered if we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonably.


Therefore, I wondered if we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonably.

Therefore, I wondered ifwhether we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonably.

Therefore, I wondered if we could set a meeting to discuss this matter both further and reasonablycome to a reasonable agreement.

Additionally, I do not agree with the new T-shirt prices.


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I think that such prices are neither attractive nor affordable for many people, especially in the current economic crisis in the country.


I think that such prices are neither attractive nor affordable for many people, especially during the current economic crisis in the country.

I think that suchthe prices are neither attractive nor affordable for many peopleotential customers, especially in the current economic crisis in the country.

Be that as it may, Í hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest convenience.


Be that as it may, ÍI hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest convenience.

Be that as it may, ÍI hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest conveniencesoon.

Be that as it may, ÍI hope it will remain as a misunderstanding and that we will be able to reach an agreement at your earliest convenience.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration on this matter.


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Thank you very much for your time and consideration onwith this matter.

I hope this will be taken into consideration and to hear back from you soon.


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I hope this will be taken into consideration and to hear back from you soon.

You already used "consideration" in the previous sentence so it sounds redundant to me to use it again here.

Kind regards,


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Sergio


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