April 20, 2023
Formal Email 1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reply to your rental housing advert that you posted, and I would like to schedule an appointment to view the property as soon as possible. Before doing so, I would like to request some additional information regarding the rental. Could you please provide me details regarding the rental such as the monthly rent, lease rent, and any other information that you think could be relevant for me to know? Additionally, I was wondering if you would be so kind to send me some more pictures so that I may have a better idea of its condition. Furthermore, it would be helpful to know if any utilities are included in the rent.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration in this matter. I hope to hear back from you soon to arrange a viewing at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Sergio
Formal Email 1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reply to your rental housing advert that you posted,isement and I would like to schedule an appointment to view the property as soon as possible.
Before doing so, I would also like to request some additional information regarding the rental.
Could you please provide me details regarding the rental such as the monthly rent, lease rent, and any other information that you think cwould be relevapertinent for me to know?
Additionally, I was wondering if you would be so kind to send me some more pictures so that I may have a better idea of its condition.
Furthermore, it would be helpful to know if any utilities are included in the rent.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration in this matter.
I hope to hear back from you soon to arrange a viewing at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfulsincerely,
Sergio
April 21, 2023
Thanks a million :D
Formal Email 1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reply to your rental housing advert isement (that you posted), and I would like to schedule an appointment to view the property as soon as possible.
Since it's a formal email, we'd write out "advertisement."
Before doing so, I would like to request some additional information (regarding the rental).
We know you're writing in regards to the rental so you don't need to mention it again.
CWould you please provide me details regarding the rental such as the monthly rent, lease rent, and any other information that you think could be relevant for me to know?
Additionally, I was wondering if you would be so kind as to send me some more pictures so that I may have a better idea of its conditionwhat it looks like.
"better idea of its condition" sounds kind of rude and you also don't want to telegraph your intent in case you do.
Furthermore, it would be helpful to know if any utilities are included in the rent.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration in this matter.
I hope to hear back from you soon to arrange a viewing at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfulSincerely,
In the US, this is much more common in a formal email. I don't think I've ever seen anyone use "Yours faithfully."
Sergio
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Very good work!
April 21, 2023
Thanks! I thought that if you know the person you're writing to and use their name in the greeting, like "Dear John," you'd typically close with "Yours sincerely." But if you don't use their name in the greeting, you'd use "Yours faithfully."
April 21, 2023
In the US, I've never seen anyone use "Yours faithfully" in an email. It's probably from the UK. To me, it sounds too intimate to use with a stranger.,
April 21, 2023
Understood, thank you :)
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Before doing so, I would like to request some additional information regarding the rental. Before doing so, I would like to request some additional information (regarding the rental). We know you're writing in regards to the rental so you don't need to mention it again.
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Could you please provide me details regarding the rental such as the monthly rent, lease rent, and any other information that you think could be relevant for me to know?
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