Dec. 12, 2021
Force
My superhero is woman, she helps people who are sick.
Her name is Force, I named her like that because she gives energy and hope. Her energy helps human to be stronger and to have hope in himself. She wear white suit and white cloak. On her cloths is black butterfly. That butterfly on her clothes means power and freedom to live beautiful life.
Soo when you are sick, Force will come to your dream and give you a energy and hope. She will helps you every time and say you to be strong.
Force
My superhero is woman, she helps people who are sick.
Her name is Force, I named her like that because she gives energy and hope.
Her energy helps humans to be stronger and to have hope in hithemselfves.
She wears a white suit and white cloak.
On her clothes there is a black butterfly.
It might help to specify where on her clothes, but that's not a grammar problem.
That butterfly on her clothes meanrepresents power and freedom to live beautiful life.
What you wrote wasn't necessarily wrong, but this is more natural.
Soo when you are sick, Force will come to your dream and give you a energy and hope.
She will helps you every time and saytell you to be strong.
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Cool concept! Your writing is solid, with only small spelling and style mistakes. Very nicely done. :)
Dec. 14, 2021
Thanks for taking your time.
My superhero is a woman, s. She helps people who are sick.
Her name is Force,. I named her like that because she gives energy and hope.
Her energy helps humans to be stronger and to have hope in hithemself.ves.
She wears a white suit and a white cloak.
On her clothses, there is a black butterfly. ¶
That butterfly on her clothes means power and the freedom to live a beautiful life.
Soo when you are sick, Force will come toappear in your dreams and give you a energy and hope.
She will helps you every time and saytell you to be strong.
Dec. 12, 2021
Thank you very much!
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That butterfly on her clothes means power and freedom to live beautiful life. That butterfly on her clothes means power and the freedom to live a beautiful life. That butterfly on her clothes What you wrote wasn't necessarily wrong, but this is more natural. |
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