Sept. 20, 2021
For Healthier
I do several things to healthy.
First, I try to eat healthy food.
When I get older, my stomach is not good enough to digest all of things.
So I changed meals from meat-oriented to vegetable-oriented.
Vegetables help me reduce my weight as well.
Next, I have exercises every day.
Every morning, I try to get walking near my house.
And I usually go to my office by my bicycle.
If I have a chance, I swim more than 1000m after work.
Lastly and most important thing is to keep my mind positive.
When I have a spear time, I try to do meditation.
It helps me avoid angry, sad and exhausting by stress.
So these are the things, I stay healthy.
I do several things to be healthy.
First, I try to eat healthy food.
WhenAs I get older, my stomach is not good enough tocan no longer digest all of everythings.
There are two simpler corrections shown below. I added "no longer" because it goes along with you saying "as I get older." It suggests that your stomach could digest everything when you were younger, but it can't anymore.
You could also say:
As I get older, my stomach cannot digest everything.
As I get older, my stomach can't digest everything.
So I changed mealsy diet from meat-oriented to vegetable-oriented.
Vegetables help me reduce mylose weight as well.
Next, I have exercises every day.
Every morning, I try to geto walking near my house.
And I usually go to my office byon my bicycle.
You could also say:
And I usually go to my office by bicycle.
If I have a chance, I swim more than 1000m after work.
Lastly and most important thing is toly, I keep my mind positive.
When I have a speare time, I try to do meditation.
It helps me avoid getting angry, sad and exhausting byed from stress.
So these are the things, I do to stay healthy.
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Nice job! Formal English writing should not have sentences that start with conjunctions ("and", "so", "but"), but it is perfectly fine in casual or conversational English.
Sept. 21, 2021
Thank you so much.
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For Healthier |
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I do several things to healthy. I do several things to be healthy. |
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First, I try to eat healthy food. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I get older, my stomach is not good enough to digest all of things.
There are two simpler corrections shown below. I added "no longer" because it goes along with you saying "as I get older." It suggests that your stomach could digest everything when you were younger, but it can't anymore. You could also say: As I get older, my stomach cannot digest everything. As I get older, my stomach can't digest everything. |
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So I changed meals from meat-oriented to vegetable-oriented. So I changed m |
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Vegetables help me reduce my weight as well. Vegetables help me |
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Next, I have exercises every day. Next, I |
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Every morning, I try to get walking near my house. Every morning, I try to g |
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And I usually go to my office by my bicycle. And I usually go to my office You could also say: And I usually go to my office by bicycle. |
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If I have a chance, I swim more than 1000m after work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Lastly and most important thing is to keep my mind positive. Lastly and most important |
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When I have a spear time, I try to do meditation. When I have |
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It helps me avoid angry, sad and exhausting by stress. It helps me avoid getting angry, sad and exhaust |
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So these are the things, I stay healthy. So these are the things |
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