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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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For a Trip

I’d like to study Chinese a litle, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.
I try to write while using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.
I want to go to Hsinchu city.
And I want to eat some delicious fried rice vermicelli.
Could you tell me if you know good restaurant?


台湾旅行に行くために、少しだけ中国語の勉強をしようと思う。
中国語は初心者以下なので、google翻訳を多用しながら書いてみる。
新竹に行きたい。
美味しい焼きビーフンが食べたい。
美味しいお店を知っていたら教えてください。

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I’d like to study Chinese a little, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

Little (spelling)

I try to write while using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is underbelow the beginner. level.

I want to go to Hsinchu city.

And I want to eat some delicious fried rice vermicelli.

Couldan you tell me if you know any good restaurant?s?

Do you know any good restaurants (sounds more natural)

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milkyway

Jan. 17, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

I’d like to study Chinese a little, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

I try to write whileby using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.very low.

I want to go to Hsinchu city.

Could you tell me if you know any good restaurants in Taiwan?

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milkyway

Jan. 17, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

I’d like want to study some Chinese a litle, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

"I'd like to" -> "I want": optional
If you want to avoid saying the same "want" twice, you can change the "I want" in "because ..." to "I'd like".

"study Chinese a little" -> "study some Chinese": was correct but now is more natural
Note that now, "some" modifies "Chinese" whereas before "a little" modifies "study".

I try towrite write while using gh the help of Google tTranslate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginnerI'm new to Chinese.

"I try to write while using google translate a lot" -> "I write with the help of Google Translate": was correct but now is more natural
Note that I have removed the 多用 meaning, but if you want to include it you can say "I write while making frequent use of Google Translate".

"because my Chinese level is under beginner" -> "because I'm new to Chinese": was correct but now is more natural

I want to go to Hsinchu city.

And I want to eat some delicious fried rice vermicelli.

Could you tell meLet me know if you know a good restaurant?!

"Could you tell me if you know" -> "Let me know if you know": was correct but now is more natural

"good restaurant" -> "a good restaurant": was incorrect, is now correct

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milkyway

Jan. 17, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.

I’d like to study Chinese a litla little bit of Chinese, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

Spelling error

I try to write while using gneed to use Google tTranslate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.that of a beginner (alternatively, "my Chinese knowledge is very basic")

Beginner would be the lowest level of understanding in the first place. I understand what you mean though- that you don't know a lot of Chinese.

Could you tell me if you know of any good restaurants? / Could you recommend me some good restaurants?

Feedback

I'm also learning Mandarin! I've been at it for 10+ years but I'd also like to go to Taiwan. It's a very lovely country. I wish you all the best on both your English and Chinese journeys.

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milkyway

Jan. 17, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments.
Let's lean togaher:)

I’d like to study Chinese a little, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

I try to write while using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.

This is technically correct, but this isn`t a phrase that anyone would say in English. A more natural way to say this would be:

I write while using google translate a lot, because my level of Chinese is very poor.

Could you tell me if you know a good restaurant?

In this case, English speakers wouldn`t usually say Could you. Something like this would be more natural:

Do you you know any good restaurants?

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milkyway

Jan. 17, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.

For a Trip


I’d like to study Chinese a litle, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.


I’d like to study Chinese a little, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

I’d like to study Chinese a litla little bit of Chinese, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

Spelling error

I’d like want to study some Chinese a litle, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

"I'd like to" -> "I want": optional If you want to avoid saying the same "want" twice, you can change the "I want" in "because ..." to "I'd like". "study Chinese a little" -> "study some Chinese": was correct but now is more natural Note that now, "some" modifies "Chinese" whereas before "a little" modifies "study".

I’d like to study Chinese a little, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

I’d like to study Chinese a little, because I want to go on a trip to Taiwan.

Little (spelling)

I try to write while using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.


I try to write while using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.

This is technically correct, but this isn`t a phrase that anyone would say in English. A more natural way to say this would be: I write while using google translate a lot, because my level of Chinese is very poor.

I try to write while using gneed to use Google tTranslate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.that of a beginner (alternatively, "my Chinese knowledge is very basic")

Beginner would be the lowest level of understanding in the first place. I understand what you mean though- that you don't know a lot of Chinese.

I try towrite write while using gh the help of Google tTranslate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginnerI'm new to Chinese.

"I try to write while using google translate a lot" -> "I write with the help of Google Translate": was correct but now is more natural Note that I have removed the 多用 meaning, but if you want to include it you can say "I write while making frequent use of Google Translate". "because my Chinese level is under beginner" -> "because I'm new to Chinese": was correct but now is more natural

I try to write whileby using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is under beginner.very low.

I try to write while using google translate a lot, because my Chinese level is underbelow the beginner. level.

I want to go to Hsinchu city.


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I want to go to Hsinchu city.

And I want to eat some delicious fried rice vermicelli.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I want to eat some delicious fried rice vermicelli.

Could you tell me if you know good restaurant?


Could you tell me if you know a good restaurant?

In this case, English speakers wouldn`t usually say Could you. Something like this would be more natural: Do you you know any good restaurants?

Could you tell me if you know of any good restaurants? / Could you recommend me some good restaurants?

Could you tell meLet me know if you know a good restaurant?!

"Could you tell me if you know" -> "Let me know if you know": was correct but now is more natural "good restaurant" -> "a good restaurant": was incorrect, is now correct

Could you tell me if you know any good restaurants in Taiwan?

Couldan you tell me if you know any good restaurant?s?

Do you know any good restaurants (sounds more natural)

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