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I was a football fan for many years. I'm talking about European football which is also called 'soccer'. I was fan of Manchester United football club. I started to watch the English Premier League in 2003. It was the year of mighty unbeatable Arsenal from London. They won that season with no losses. I guess I should become their fan, but I was appealed by the other team from the north of the country. I felt that Manchester United at that time was the true British team, with the manager Sir Alex Ferguson and the main stars like Paul Scholes, Ryan Giggs, Gary Neville. It was a team of fighters. They played in an uncompromising, male style, as Arsenal played more sophisticated, technique football. I think 2003 was the last year of David Beckham in Manchester United. After that season, they bought Cristiano Ronaldo, and Wayne Rooney on the next year, who became my favorite players for the next several years./
Now I don't watch football that often. I've quit following Manchester United for 3-4 years already. Still, I have a little nostalgia about that times when I was their fan, and the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

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I'm talking about European football, which is also called 'soccer'.

I was a fan of the football club "Manchester United football club".

I guess I should have become their fan, but I was appealed by the other team from the north of the countryfound the aforementioned northern team more appealing.

or: "one might expect I would have become their fan at this point"

"I found Manchester United more appealing"

They played in an uncompromising, male style, as Arsenal played more sophisticated, technique football.

I'm not sure if "technique football" exists as a technical term in the field of sport. I would have said "football with good/strong technique", but I don't know much about this topic.

I think 2003 was the last year of David Beckham in Manchester United.

better: David Beckham's last year

After that season, they bought Cristiano Ronaldo, ands well as Wayne Rooney on the next year, who became my favorite players for the next several years./

It's already been 3-4 years since I've quit following Manchester United for 3-4 years already.

Still, I havefeel a lbittle of nostalgia aboutfrom thate times when I was their fan, and(from) the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

Football

I was a football fan for many years.

I'm talking about European football, which is also called 'soccer'.

I was fan of Manchester United, the football club.

There are other ways to express this:
- "the Manchester United football club" (works with this name, though with others it won't)

I started to watch the English Premier League in 2003.

It was the year of the mighty, unbeatable Arsenal from London.

See this: https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/214813/using-the-definite-article-the-with-adjective-before-a-persons-name

They won that season with no losses.

I guess I should have become their fan, but I was appealed by the other team from the north of the country.

I felt that Manchester United at that time was the true British team, with the manager Sir Alex Ferguson and the main stars like Paul Scholes, Ryan Giggs, Gary Neville.

It was a team of fighters.

They played in an uncompromising, male style, as Arsenal played a more sophisticated, techniquecal football.

"Male" is fine, though I would possibly use "masculine" unless I wanted to emphasize maleness.

I think 2003 was the last year of David Beckham inwith Manchester United.

After that season, they brought on Cristiano Ronaldo, and Wayne Rooney on the next year, whoand they became my favorite players for the next several years./

"Who" should be placed immediate to what it modifies, here "Cristiano Ronaldo and Wayne Rooney."

Now I don't watch football that often.

I've quit following Manchester United for 3-4 years already.

Still, I have a little nostalgia aboutfrom thate times when I w that I spent as their fan, and the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

Football

I was a football fan for many years.

I'm talking about European football, which is also called 'soccer'.

I started to watch the English Premier League in 2003.

It was the year of mighty, unbeatable Arsenal from London.

When you have two adjectives describing one noun without the word 'and' put a comma after the first adjective

They won that season with no losses.

I guessthought I should become their fan, but I was appealed byfound the other team from the north of the country more appealing.

I felt that Manchester United at that time was the true British team, with the manager Sir Alex Ferguson and the main stars like Paul Scholes, Ryan Giggs, Gary Neville.

They played in an uncompromising, male style, whereas Arsenal played more sophisticated, technique-based football.

After that season, they brought Cristiano Ronaldo, and Wayne Rooney on the next year, who became my favorite players for the next several years./

You can say bought and drop the on or you can say brought on. they mean different things but both would work here

Now I don't watch football that often.

Still, I havefeel a little nostalgia aboutfor thate times when I was their fan, and the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

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I was a football fan for many years.


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I'm talking about European football which is also called 'soccer'.


I'm talking about European football, which is also called 'soccer'.

I'm talking about European football, which is also called 'soccer'.

I'm talking about European football, which is also called 'soccer'.

I was fan of Manchester United football club.


I was fan of Manchester United, the football club.

There are other ways to express this: - "the Manchester United football club" (works with this name, though with others it won't)

I was a fan of the football club "Manchester United football club".

I started to watch the English Premier League in 2003.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was the year of mighty unbeatable Arsenal from London.


It was the year of mighty, unbeatable Arsenal from London.

When you have two adjectives describing one noun without the word 'and' put a comma after the first adjective

It was the year of the mighty, unbeatable Arsenal from London.

See this: https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/214813/using-the-definite-article-the-with-adjective-before-a-persons-name

They won that season with no losses.


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I guess I should become their fan, but I was appealed by the other team from the north of the country.


I guessthought I should become their fan, but I was appealed byfound the other team from the north of the country more appealing.

I guess I should have become their fan, but I was appealed by the other team from the north of the country.

I guess I should have become their fan, but I was appealed by the other team from the north of the countryfound the aforementioned northern team more appealing.

or: "one might expect I would have become their fan at this point" "I found Manchester United more appealing"

I felt that Manchester United at that time was the true British team, with the manager Sir Alex Ferguson and the main stars like Paul Scholes, Ryan Giggs, Gary Neville.


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It was a team of fighters.


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They played in an uncompromising, male style, as Arsenal played more sophisticated, technique football.


They played in an uncompromising, male style, whereas Arsenal played more sophisticated, technique-based football.

They played in an uncompromising, male style, as Arsenal played a more sophisticated, techniquecal football.

"Male" is fine, though I would possibly use "masculine" unless I wanted to emphasize maleness.

They played in an uncompromising, male style, as Arsenal played more sophisticated, technique football.

I'm not sure if "technique football" exists as a technical term in the field of sport. I would have said "football with good/strong technique", but I don't know much about this topic.

I think 2003 was the last year of David Beckham in Manchester United.


I think 2003 was the last year of David Beckham inwith Manchester United.

I think 2003 was the last year of David Beckham in Manchester United.

better: David Beckham's last year

After that season, they bought Cristiano Ronaldo, and Wayne Rooney on the next year, who became my favorite players for the next several years./


After that season, they brought Cristiano Ronaldo, and Wayne Rooney on the next year, who became my favorite players for the next several years./

You can say bought and drop the on or you can say brought on. they mean different things but both would work here

After that season, they brought on Cristiano Ronaldo, and Wayne Rooney on the next year, whoand they became my favorite players for the next several years./

"Who" should be placed immediate to what it modifies, here "Cristiano Ronaldo and Wayne Rooney."

After that season, they bought Cristiano Ronaldo, ands well as Wayne Rooney on the next year, who became my favorite players for the next several years./

Now I don't watch football that often.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've quit following Manchester United for 3-4 years already.


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It's already been 3-4 years since I've quit following Manchester United for 3-4 years already.

Still, I have a little nostalgia about that times when I was their fan, and the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.


Still, I havefeel a little nostalgia aboutfor thate times when I was their fan, and the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

Still, I have a little nostalgia aboutfrom thate times when I w that I spent as their fan, and the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

Still, I havefeel a lbittle of nostalgia aboutfrom thate times when I was their fan, and(from) the great victories and loses I went through with my favorite team.

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