Jan. 8, 2025
Foot sole massage
I keep doing massages on my foot sole as a good daily habit. There are many points on our sole and if we push it, there must be good influence for our body and mind.
In this world there are many method for our health. Now I want to master the method of foot massage. Whenever I finished the massage, I felt refreshed since the tiredness on my foot went away.
Does somebody give me a massage?
No one there?
Ok, I have no choice but to do it by myself.
足裏マッサージ
毎日の習慣として、私は足裏をマッサージしています。
足裏にはたくさんのツボがあり、押すと体にも心にも良く効きます。世の中には健康になるためのたくさんのやり方があります。今、私は足裏マッサージのやり方を極めたいと思っています。足裏マッサージを終えると、疲れが消えるのでリラックスできます。
誰かがマッサージしてくれたら良いけど、誰もいません。だから、自分でやるしかないんです。
Foot sole massage
I keep doing massages on my foot sole as a good daily habit.
There are many points on our sole and if we push ithem, there musty can be a good influence foron our body and mind.
In this world there are many method fors to improve our health.
Now I want to master the method of foot massage.
Whenever Every time I finished the a massage, I felt refreshed since the tiredness on my foot went away.
DoesCan somebody give me a massage?
No one there?
Ok, I have no choice but to do it by myself.
Foot sole massage
In English, the phrase "foot massage" often means "foot sole massage" already.
I keep doing massages massage the soles onf my foot soleeet as a good daily habit.
There are many points on our soles and if we push it, there must be good influence forapply pressure to them, there's a good effect on our body and mind.
In this world there are many methods for maintaining our health.
Now I want to master the method of foot massage.
Whenever I finished the massage, I feelt refreshed since the tiredness on my foot wentgoes away.
Does somebodyIs there someone else who can give me a (foot) massage?
No one there, right?
Ok,Then I have no choice but to do it by myself.
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Well done! Massaging your feet is also a good way of improving blood circulation.
Foot sole massage
OK but normally we just say "foot massage"
I keep doing massages on my foot sole as a good daily habit.
There are many points on our sole and if we push it, there must be a good influence foron our body and mind.
1. You have influence *on* something.
2. "Must" is probably not the best word choice. Maybe "there is" or "there will be."
To sound perfectly natural, I would rewrite it as " There are main points on our sole, which if we push will have a good influence on our body and mind."
In this world there are many method fors to improve our health.
Now I want to master the method of foot massage.
Whenever I finished the a massage, I feelt refreshed since the tiredness (soreness? aches?) on my foot wentgo away.
Present tense is better for this sentence because you are talking about an action that you do habitually. You still receive massages.
"Tiredness" is a bit strange word choice. The idea is understandable, but isn't a common way of speaking.
DoesWill somebody give me a massage?
No one there?
Ok, I have no choice but to do it by myself.
Feedback
I made some corrections to make it sound more natural, but what you wrote was perfectly understandable.
The ending is cute, too! :)
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