Focusing on thmyself and others

'myself' is more common in regular english than 'thyself'

Starting from a privilege, positionPrivilege is relative to the judge and judgedthe person ibeing judged. In my case, I thought that I didwasn't havein a privileged position.

OI only thought this because my family, wereas struggling with money.

nNow Ii'm improving mentality, and I'm focusing on building real wealth.

In my path to increase empathy towards others, it comes to mind that I need to help the ones that turned me downhave wronged me in the past.

This phrase makes more sense in this context

This includes my mother who I love but I haven't forgiven sincebecause of childhood traumas.

At this stage, we need to staybe stronger.

'Stay' implies staying still, and not improving. Saying 'stay stronger' doesn't make sense because becoming stronger implies that you are changing, not 'staying' the same.

Aand avoid.

hate toward the ones who love us, even if they have made mistakes.

I would add something like this at the end to drive home the message that we shouldn't give up on people we love just because they have made mistakes in the past, but this is optional and not an absolutly necessary correction!

Focusing on thyself and others

Starting from a privilege,d position is relative to the judge and judged person in my case, I thought that I didn't have a privileged position.

Only because my family, wereas struggling with money.

nNow, I'm improving mentality, and I'm focusing on real wealth.

This includes my mother who I love but I haven't forgiven since/ because of my childhood traumas.

And avoid hate towards the ones who love us.

hate toward the ones who love us.