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Daily Habits of Well-Known People

How organised were the lives of famous writers, psychotherapists and philosophers? Did they have any specific habits or rituals? In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about the day-to-day lives of famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists.

A French existentialist philosopher, Simona de Beauvoir, was a hard-working person with a strict schedule. According to biographers, she worked every day and usually didn't have problems with writer’s block. Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she would feel bored soon thereafter, and would be in a hurry to return to work.

De Beauvoir also had an open relationship with the French playwright and novelist Jean-Paul Sartre from 1929 until his death in 1980. They were not only friends but also sexual partners. Moreover, their relationships were not traditional. Both of them had other lovers, but they agreed to share all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other.

Thomas Wulf usually began writing around midnight and preferred to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working. Wulf also had a specific problem: he was quite tall, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing. After searching in vain, he decided to write while standing next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.

Patricia Hismith wrote in bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an ashtray, donuts, and a cup of coffee. She avoided anything related to discipline, and wanted to make writing as pleasurable as possible. She also had a habit of drinking some alcohol before she started writing. She was sure that a glass of gin helped her cope with her hyper-activeness, which she even regarded as even “excessive” sometimes. Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep a bottle of vodka near her bed. Hismith was drank every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her consumption of alcohol per day.

A Danish philosopher Soren Kierkegaard liked walking because it helped him to come up with new thoughts and ideas. He also liked drinking coffee and had a collection of 50 different cups. Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning, the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard's morning coffee and announced his decision to the philosopher.

Just like Patricia Hismith, the French writer Voltaire also liked working in bed. Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who typically came to his house early in the morning. The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that was when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone. In general, Voltaire could work over 18 hours a day.

Austrian neurologist Sigmund Freud was able to build a life devoted to work thanks to his wife Martha, who did all the housework. Martha ironed Sigmund’s handkerchiefs, folded his laundry, and even put toothpaste on his toothbrush. Nevertheless, he wasn’t a slacker either. Sigmund woke up every day about 7 in the morning and waited for his barber, who came to trim his beard every day. After shaving, the whole family had breakfast together. Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like roast beef or mashed potatoes. He genuinely enjoyed his meals and sometimes was so concentrated on food that guests felt uncomfortable as Sigmund could keep silent throughout the entire meal.

Besides tasty meals, Sigmund also loved walking and smoking. Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but rather a quick rush along the streets. He also enjoyed smoking very much. Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, so Sigmund responded that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew did not try it, he would miss out. In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and worsening health problems.

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Nov. 28, 2022

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Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she feltwould feel bored soon thereafter , and wasould be in a hurry to come backreturn to work.

I would use the conditional here.

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Nov. 28, 2022

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They were not only friends but also sexual partners, and. Moreover (Причём), their relationships were not traditional.

Reduce the reliance on using the word "and"- use other similar connectors.

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Nov. 28, 2022

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After many fruitless searches/After searching in vain, he decided to write while standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.

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Nov. 28, 2022

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Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an ashtray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.

It sounds better without the article, as I assume that you are talking about a bed in general.

Astray- Partaking in morally questionable acts (eg. He was led astray by his friends and found himself in a life of crime and violence)

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Hismith was drianking every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her use/ better: consumption of alcohol per day.

Use a gadget, a tool, etc..

Consume drugs, food, alcohol, etc..

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Nov. 28, 2022

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Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning, the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard's morning coffee and [announced his decision to the philosopher.]- Это не понятно. Какое решение?

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Nov. 28, 2022

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The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that' was when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.

Avoid the use of contractions in formal writing

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Nov. 28, 2022

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As for smoking, he enjoyed this activity very much.

I would write "He also enjoyed smoking very much."

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Nov. 28, 2022

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hmm, it's controversial. Another editor told me it's OK to use contractions in writing unless I write a scientific report, for example

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Nov. 28, 2022

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second conditional — impossible things in the present/unlikely in the future. example: If I had time, I would write every day. we can use conditional for the past?

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Nov. 28, 2022

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announced from which cup the philosopher would drink coffee today

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Nov. 28, 2022

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It's not wrong to use them in writing, it just depends on the tone you want to convey - in this case your text sounds more formal so it's better to do without them.

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https://www.butte.edu/departments/cas/tipsheets/grammar/would.html "To show habitual past action: Helen would sob whenever John would leave home. Think of would as did."

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Oh ok 😂😂 it's fine then

Daily Habits of Well-Known People

Did they have some specific habits or rituals?

In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about day-to-day lives of famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists.

A French existentialist philosopher Simona de Beauvoir was a hard-working person with strict schedule.

Even if Simona had a few weeks off, she felt bored soon thereafter, and was in a hurry to come back to work.

Simona also had an open relationship with a French playwright and novelist Jean-Paul Sartre from 1929 until his death in 1980.

A Danish philosopher Soren Kierkegaard liked walking because it helped him to come up with new thoughts and ideas.

Soren and his secretary had a strange ritual; every morning the secretary chose a new cup for Soren’s morning coffee, and announced his decision to the philosopher.

He also liked drinking coffee and had a collection of 50 different cups.

Austrian neurologist Sigmund Freud was able to build a life devoted to work thanks to his wife Martha, who did all housework.

In general, Voltaire could work over 18 hours a day.

Marta ironed Sigmund’s handkerchiefs, folded his laundry, and even put toothpaste on his toothbrush.

Although he wasn’t a slacker either.

Sigmund woke up every day about 7:00 in mornings, and waited for his barber, who came to trim psychotherapist’s beard every day.

Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like a roast beef, or mashed potato.

He genuinely enjoyed his meals, and sometimes was so concentrated on food that guests felt uncomfortable as Sigmund could kept silent along the whole dinner.

Besides tasty meals, Sigmund loved walking and smoking.

Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but a quick rush along the streets.

As for smoking, he enjoyed this activity very much.

In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and evolving health problems.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, putting asurrounding herself with cigarettes, an astray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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For sure! I suggested "surrounded with" because it sounds better than "putting around". It shows that the person likes these things and wants to be near them. The word "put" doesn't carry as much meaning.

Daily Habits of Well-Known People

In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about day-to-day lives of famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists.

Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, putting around herself cigarettes, an astray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.

He also liked drinking coffee and had a collection of 50 different cups.

The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so at this time he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.

In general, Voltaire could work over 18 hours a day.

Besides tasty meals, Sigmund loved walking and smoking.

Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but a quick rush along the streets.

As for smoking, he enjoyed this activity very much.

In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and evolving health problems.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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According to biographers, she worked every day and usually hadn’tdidn't have problems with writer’s block.

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Even if Simonade Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she felt bored soon thereafter, and was in a hurry to come back to work.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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Simonade Beauvoir also had an open relationship with athe French playwright and novelist, Jean-Paul Sartre, from 1929 until his death in 1980.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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They were not only friends but they were also sexual partners, and their relationships were odd in some waynot traditional.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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Also ThomasWulf also had a specific problem;: he was quite tallish, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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A Danish philosopher, Soren Kierkegaard, liked walking because it helped him to come up with new thoughts and ideas.

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SorenKierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual;: every morning the secretary chose a new cup for SorenKierkegaard’s morning coffee, and announced his decision to the philosopher.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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As well asLike Patricia Hismith, athe French writer, Voltaire, liked working in a bed.

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As well asLike Patricia Hismith, athe French writer, Voltaire, liked working in a bed.

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Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like a roast beef, or mashed potatoes.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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"had no"is also possible?

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Nov. 24, 2022

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why I can't use her name here?

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Nov. 24, 2022

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I coordinate here nouns, not independent clauses. I think I can write "They were not only friends but also sexual partners". Example from my textbook: The winner of the championship received not only a prize but also a medal.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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tallish is a word from a textbook o_O which means "tall"

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Nov. 24, 2022

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again, I think his name is necessary here, so no commas

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Nov. 24, 2022

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no comma because it's a dependent clause?

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Nov. 24, 2022

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"as well as" is not correct here?

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Nov. 24, 2022

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and the same question with commas. his name is necessary here, why you suggest to use commas?

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Nov. 24, 2022

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roast beef can be plural or singular. in plural it is roast beefs. so it seems I can say either "a roast beef" or "roast beefs"

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Nov. 24, 2022

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We don't ever say or write "roast beefs" in the US.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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I think it sounds better with the "they were also" but that's my preference.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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We very rarely use it in the US.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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Here, I think the commas are necessary.

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Nov. 24, 2022

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It sounds funny to me.

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How were organised lives of famous writers, psychotherapists and philosophers?


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How were organised were the lives of famous writers, psychotherapists and philosophers? How organised were the lives of famous writers, psychotherapists and philosophers?

Did they have some specific habits or rituals?


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In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about day-to-day lives of famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists.


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In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about the day-to-day lives of (some) famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists. In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about the day-to-day lives of (some) famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists.

A French existentialist philosopher Simona de Beauvoir was a hard-working person with strict schedule.


A French existentialist philosopher, Simona de Beauvoir, was a hard-working person with a strict schedule. A French existentialist philosopher, Simona de Beauvoir, was a hard-working person with a strict schedule.

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According to biographers, she worked every day and usually hadn’t problems with writer’s block.


According to biographers, she worked every day and usually hadn’tdidn't have problems with writer’s block. According to biographers, she worked every day and usually didn't have problems with writer’s block.

According to biographers, she worked every day and usually hadn’tdidn't have problems with writer’s block. According to biographers, she worked every day and usually didn't have problems with writer’s block.

Even if Simona had a few weeks off, she felt bored soon thereafter, and was in a hurry to come back to work.


Even if Simonade Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she felt bored soon thereafter, and was in a hurry to come back to work. Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she felt bored soon thereafter and was in a hurry to come back to work.

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Simona also had an open relationship with a French playwright and novelist Jean-Paul Sartre from 1929 until his death in 1980.


Simonade Beauvoir also had an open relationship with athe French playwright and novelist, Jean-Paul Sartre, from 1929 until his death in 1980. de Beauvoir also had an open relationship with the French playwright and novelist, Jean-Paul Sartre, from 1929 until his death in 1980.

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They were not only friends but also sexual partners, and their relationships were odd in some way.


They were not only friends but they were also sexual partners, and their relationships were odd in some waynot traditional. They were not only friends but they were also sexual partners and their relationships were not traditional.

They were not only friends but also sexual partners, and their relationships were odd in some ways. They were not only friends but also sexual partners, and their relationships were odd in some ways.

Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, they share with each other all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences.


Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, they share with each otherd all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other. Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, they shared all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other.

yuck.

Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, they shared with each other all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences. Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, they shared with each other all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences.

Thomas Wulf usually began writing about midnight, and prefer to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working.


Thomas Wulf usually began writing abroutnd midnight, and preferred to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working. Thomas Wulf usually began writing around midnight and preferred to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working.

Thomas Wulf usually began writing about midnight, and preferred to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working. Thomas Wulf usually began writing about midnight, and preferred to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working.

Also Thomas had a specific problem; he was tallish, so he never could find suitable chair or table for writing.


Also ThomasWulf also had a specific problem;: he was quite tallish, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing. Wulf also had a specific problem: he was quite tall, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing.

Also Thomas had a specific problem; he was quite tallish, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing. Also Thomas had a specific problem; he was quite tall, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing.

After all, after hapless searches, he decided to write standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.


After all, after hapmany fruitless searches, he decided to write standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen. After many fruitless searches, he decided to write standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.

After all, aftermany hapless searches, he decided to write standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen. After many hapless searches, he decided to write standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.

Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, putting around herself cigarettes, an astray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.


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Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, putting asurrounding herself with cigarettes, an astray, donuts, and a cup of coffee. Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an astray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.

She avoided anything related to discipline, and wanted to make writing as much pleasurable as possible.


She avoided anything related to discipline, and wanted to make writing as much pleasurable as possible. She avoided anything related to discipline and wanted to make writing as pleasurable as possible.

She avoided anything related to discipline, and wanted to make writing as much pleasurable as possible. She avoided anything related to discipline, and wanted to make writing as pleasurable as possible.

She also had a habit to drink some alcohol before she started writing.


She also had a habit tof drinking some alcohol before she started writing. She also had a habit of drinking some alcohol before she started writing.

She also had a habit tof drinking some alcohol before she started writing. She also had a habit of drinking some alcohol before she started writing.

She was sure that a glass of gin would have helped her to reduce a level of energy, which she regarded as even “maniс” sometimes.


She was sure that a glass of gin would have helped her to reduce aher level of energy, which she regarded as even “maniс” sometimes. She was sure that a glass of gin helped her reduce her level of energy, which she regarded as even “maniс” sometimes.

She was sure that a glass of gin would have helped her to (reduce a level of energyher energy level / mellow out), which she even regarded as even “maniс” sometimes. She was sure that a glass of gin helped her to (reduce her energy level / mellow out), which she even regarded as “maniс” sometimes.

Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep near her bed a bottle of vodka.


Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep near her bed a bottle of vodka near her bed. Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep a bottle of vodka near her bed.

Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep near her bed a bottle of vodka near her bed. Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep a bottle of vodka near her bed.

Patricia was drinking every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle which restricted her limit of alcohol per day.


PatriciaHismith was drinking every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle whichto restricted her limituse of alcohol per day. Hismith was drinking every morning right after she woke up and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her use of alcohol per day.

Patricia was drianking every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle which restrictshowed her limit of alcohol pereach day. Patricia drank every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle which showed her limit of alcohol each day.

A Danish philosopher Soren Kierkegaard liked walking because it helped him to come up with new thoughts and ideas.


A Danish philosopher, Soren Kierkegaard, liked walking because it helped him to come up with new thoughts and ideas. A Danish philosopher, Soren Kierkegaard, liked walking because it helped him to come up with new thoughts and ideas.

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He also liked drinking coffee and had a collection of 50 different cups.


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Soren and his secretary had a strange ritual; every morning the secretary chose a new cup for Soren’s morning coffee, and announced his decision to the philosopher.


SorenKierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual;: every morning the secretary chose a new cup for SorenKierkegaard’s morning coffee, and announced his decision to the philosopher. Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard’s morning coffee and announced his decision to the philosopher.

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As well as Patricia Hismith, a French writer Voltaire liked working in a bed.


As well asLike Patricia Hismith, athe French writer, Voltaire, liked working in a bed. Like Patricia Hismith, the French writer, Voltaire, liked working in a bed.

As well asJust like Patricia Hismith, a French writer named Voltaire liked working in a bed. Just like Patricia Hismith, a French writer named Voltaire liked working in a bed.

Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who were came to his house typically early in mornings.


The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and night, so at this time he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.


In general, Voltaire could work over 18 hours a day.


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Austrian neurologist Sigmund Freud was able to build a life devoted to work thanks to his wife Martha, who did all housework.


Austrian neurologist, Sigmund Freud, was able to build a life devoted to work thanks to his wife Martha, who did all of the housework. Austrian neurologist, Sigmund Freud, was able to build a life devoted to work thanks to his wife Martha, who did all of the housework.

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Marta ironed Sigmund’s handkerchiefs, folded his laundry, and even put toothpaste on his toothbrush.


Martha ironed Sigmund’s handkerchiefs, folded his laundry, and even put toothpaste on his toothbrush. Martha ironed Sigmund’s handkerchiefs, folded his laundry, and even put toothpaste on his toothbrush.

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Although he wasn’t a slacker either.


Although hHe wasn’t a slacker either. He wasn’t a slacker either.

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Sigmund woke up every day about 7:00 in mornings, and waited for his barber, who came to trim psychotherapist’s beard every day.


Sigmund woke up every day about 7:00 in the mornings, and waited for his barber, who came to trim the psychotherapist’s beard every day. Sigmund woke up every day about 7 in the morning, and waited for his barber, who came to trim the psychotherapist’s beard every day.

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After shaving, all family had a breakfast together.


After shaving, allthe whole family had a breakfast together. After shaving, the whole family had breakfast together.

After shaving, allthe whole family had a breakfast together. After shaving, the whole family had breakfast together.

Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like a roast beef, or mashed potato.


Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like a roast beef, or mashed potatoes. Sigmund wasn’t picky about food and preferred traditional dishes, like roast beef or mashed potatoes.

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He genuinely enjoyed his meals, and sometimes was so concentrated on food that guests felt uncomfortable as Sigmund could kept silent along the whole dinner.


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He genuinely enjoyed his meals, and sometimes was so concentrated on food that guests felt uncomfortable as Sigmund could keept silent along the whole dinnerthroughout the entire meal. He genuinely enjoyed his meals and sometimes was so concentrated on food that guests felt uncomfortable as Sigmund could keep silent throughout the entire meal.

Besides tasty meals, Sigmund loved walking and smoking.


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Besides tasty meals, Sigmund (also) loved walking and smoking. Besides tasty meals, Sigmund (also) loved walking and smoking.

Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but a quick rush along the streets.


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Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but rather a quick rush along the streets. Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but rather a quick rush along the streets.

As for smoking, he enjoyed this activity very much.


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As for smoking, he enjoyed this activity very much. As for smoking, he enjoyed this activity very much.

I would write "He also enjoyed smoking very much."

Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, and then Sigmund answered him that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew will not try it, he’ll miss out.


Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, and then Sigmund answered him so Sigmund replied that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew will not try it, he’ll miss out. Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar so Sigmund replied that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew will not try it, he’ll miss out.

Once, his nephew refused to (give him/try?) a cigar, and then Sigmund answered himresponded that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew will nodoesn't try it, he’ll miss out. Once, his nephew refused to (give him/try?) a cigar, and then Sigmund responded that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew doesn't try it, he’ll miss out.

Did you mean to say Sigmund offered his nephew a cigar?

In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and evolving health problems.


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In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and evolvworsening health problems. In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and worsening health problems.

Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who came to his house typically early in mornings.


Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who typically came to his house typically early in the mornings. Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who typically came to his house early in the morning.

Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who typically came to his house typically early in the mornings. Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who typically came to his house early in the morning.

The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so at this time he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.


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The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so at this timethat's when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone. The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that's when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.

How organised were the lives of famous writers, psychotherapists and philosophers?


Did they have any specific habits or rituals?


A French existentialist philosopher, Simona de Beauvoir, was a hard-working person with a strict schedule.


According to biographers, she worked every day and usually didn't have problems with writer’s block.


Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she felt bored soon thereafter, and was in a hurry to come back to work.


Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she feltwould feel bored soon thereafter , and wasould be in a hurry to come backreturn to work. Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she would feel bored soon thereafter , and would be in a hurry to return to work.

I would use the conditional here.

De Beauvoir also had an open relationship with the French playwright and novelist Jean-Paul Sartre from 1929 until his death in 1980.


They were not only friends but also sexual partners, and their relationships were not traditional.


They were not only friends but also sexual partners, and. Moreover (Причём), their relationships were not traditional. They were not only friends but also sexual partners. Moreover (Причём), their relationships were not traditional.

Reduce the reliance on using the word "and"- use other similar connectors.

Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, they shared all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other.


Both of them had other lovers, but since they had a specific arrangement, theythey agreed to shared all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other. Both of them had other lovers, but they agreed to share all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other.

less "clumsy" this way.

Thomas Wulf usually began writing around midnight and preferred to drink a lot of coffee and tea while he was working.


Wulf also had a specific problem: he was quite tall, so he never could find a suitable chair or table for writing.


After many fruitless searches, he decided to write standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.


After many fruitless searches/After searching in vain, he decided to write while standing up next to a refrigerator in his kitchen. After many fruitless searches/After searching in vain, he decided to write while standing next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.

She avoided anything related to discipline, and wanted to make writing as pleasurable as possible.


She also had a habit of drinking some alcohol before she started writing.


She was sure that a glass of gin helped her reduce her level of energy, which she regarded as even “maniс” sometimes.


She was sure that a glass of gin helped her reduce her level of energy/(cope with her hyper-activeness), which she even regarded as even “maniс“excessive” sometimes. She was sure that a glass of gin helped her reduce her level of energy/(cope with her hyper-activeness), which she even regarded as “excessive” sometimes

Later in life the writer developed a high tolerance to alcohol, so she would also keep a bottle of vodka near her bed.


Hismith was drinking every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her use of alcohol per day.


Hismith was drianking every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her use/ better: consumption of alcohol per day. Hismith drank every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her use/ better: consumption of alcohol per day.

Use a gadget, a tool, etc.. Consume drugs, food, alcohol, etc..

Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard's morning coffee and announced his decision to the philosopher.


Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning, the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard's morning coffee and [announced his decision to the philosopher.]- Это не понятно. Какое решение? Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning, the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard's morning coffee and [announced his decision to the philosopher.]- Это не понятно. Какое решение?

Like Patricia Hismith, the French writer Voltaire liked working in a bed.


LJust like Patricia Hismith, the French writer Voltaire also liked working in a bed. Just like Patricia Hismith, the French writer Voltaire also liked working in bed.

Sounds better without the article (same reason as above)

Usually he read or dictated his new texts to one of his secretaries, who typically came to his house early in the morning.


Austrian neurologist Sigmund Freud was able to build a life devoted to work thanks to his wife Martha, who did all the housework.


Martha ironed Sigmund’s handkerchiefs, folded his laundry, and even put toothpaste on his toothbrush.


Nevertheless, he wasn’t a slacker either.


Sigmund woke up every day about 7 in the morning and waited for his barber, who came to trim his beard every day.


After shaving, the whole family had breakfast together.


Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like roast beefs or mashed potatoes.


He genuinely enjoyed his meals and sometimes was so concentrated on food that guests felt uncomfortable as Sigmund could keep silent throughout the entire meal.


Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, so Sigmund replied that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew will not try it, he’ll miss out.


Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, so Sigmund replied that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew willdid not try it, he’ll would miss out. Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, so Sigmund replied that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew did not try it, he would miss out.

Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an astray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.


Patricia Hismith wrote in a bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an ashtray, donuts, and a cup of coffee. Patricia Hismith wrote in bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an ashtray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.

It sounds better without the article, as I assume that you are talking about a bed in general. Astray- Partaking in morally questionable acts (eg. He was led astray by his friends and found himself in a life of crime and violence)

The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that's when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.


The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that' was when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone. The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that was when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.

Avoid the use of contractions in formal writing

Sigmund wasn’t picky about food, and preferred traditional dishes, like roast beef or mashed potatoes.


In this post, I’ll share some interesting facts about the day-to-day lives of famous writers, philosophers and psychotherapists.


Even if de Beauvoir had a few weeks off, she would feel bored soon thereafter, and would be in a hurry to return to work.


They were not only friends but also sexual partners.


Moreover, their relationships were not traditional.


Both of them had other lovers, but they agreed to share all the details about their romantic and sexual experiences with each other.


After searching in vain, he decided to write while standing next to a refrigerator in his kitchen.


Patricia Hismith wrote in bed, surrounding herself with cigarettes, an ashtray, donuts, and a cup of coffee.


She was sure that a glass of gin helped her cope with her hyper-activeness, which she even regarded as even “excessive” sometimes.


Hismith was drank every morning right after she woke up, and made a mark on the bottle to restrict her consumption of alcohol per day.


Kierkegaard and his secretary had a strange ritual: every morning, the secretary chose a new cup for Kierkegaard's morning coffee and announced his decision to the philosopher.


Just like Patricia Hismith, the French writer Voltaire also liked working in bed.


The best time for writing was, in Voltaire’s opinion, evenings and nights, so that was when he locked his bedroom and wrote alone.


Besides tasty meals, Sigmund also loved walking and smoking.


Usually he walked about an hour or more every day, and it was not a relaxed stroll, but rather a quick rush along the streets.


He also enjoyed smoking very much.


Once, his nephew refused to give him a cigar, so Sigmund responded that smoking is both the cheapest and the most pleasurable activity in the world, so if his nephew did not try it, he would miss out.


In general, Freud could smoke over 20 cigars a day despite his doctors’ warnings and worsening health problems.


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