Oct. 16, 2020
Lonelier Than Being Lonely
Being alone doesn't necessarily mean being lonely.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you will be alone because you will be the only one there. However, when you follow a path everyone goes, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong to.
When you feel peaceful being alone, you are not lonely; when you feel alone in the crowd, you are lonely.
You may feel lonely when you are single, but you will feel lonelier when you are unloved in a relationship.
You may feel lonely when you have only a few friends, but you will feel lonelier when you have no one to talk to despite having hundreds of friends on Facebook.
Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo. Trying to escape from loneliness is lonelier because it confirms your anxiety over loneliness.
比寂寞還寂寞
孤單不等於寂寞。
當你還擇一條沒人走的路，你是孤單的，因為那邊沒有其他人。當你跟著大家走一樣的路，你會覺得寂寞，因為你不屬於那裡。
當你可以平靜地獨處，你不寂寞；當你在人群裡感到孤單，你是寂寞的。
當你單身的時候可能會覺得寂寞，但當你在關係裡感覺不到愛的時候反而覺得更寂寞。
當你只有少少的幾個朋友，你可能會覺得寂寞；但當你的臉書有幾百個朋友卻找不到人說話時，你會覺得更寂寞。
寂寞就是寂寞，因為這就是你當下的狀態。企圖逃離寂寞會讓你覺得更寂寞，因為這驗證了你對寂寞的焦慮。
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However, when you follow a path everyone goes, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong to.
However, when you follow a path everyone goes, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong.
Lonelier Than Being Lonely
Being alone doesn't necessarily mean being lonely.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you will be alone because you will be the only one there.
However, when you follow athe same path as everyone goeselse, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong to.
However, when you follow the same path as everyone else, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong.
When you feel peaceful being alone, you are not lonely; when you feel alone in the crowd, you are lonely.
You may feel lonely when you are single, but you will feel lonelier when you are unloved in a relationship.
You may feel lonely when you have only a few friends, but you will feel lonelier when you have no one to talk to despite having hundreds of friends on Facebook.
Trying to escape from loneliness ismakes you feel lonelier because it confirms your anxiety over lonelinessfear of being alone.
Trying to escape loneliness makes you feel lonelier because it confirms your fear of being alone.
Oct. 17, 2020
Great job, by the way!!
Lonelier Than Being LLonely
Lonelier than Alonely
Lonelier Than Lonely
Lonelier than Alone
'Being' is implied with 'Lonely'. What you have isn't wrong, but this was is more idiomatic and it's a catchy title.
'Lonelier than Alone' is what your journal entry is actually about.
Being alone doesn't necessarily mean being lonely.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you will bare alone because you willare be the only one there.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you are alone because you are be the only one there.
Choose is present tense, so it makes sense to say 'are'.
However, when you follow a path that everyone gouses, you willmay feel lonely because it is not where you belong to.
However, when you follow a path that everyone uses, you may feel lonely because it is not where you belong.
You are assuming here that the person isn't like others? Better to say 'may feel', because it's not true of all.
When you feel peaceful being alone, you are not lonely; when you feel alone in the crowd, you are lonely.
You may feel lonely when you are single, but you will feel lonelier when you are unloved in a relationship.
You may feel lonely when you have only a few friends, but you will feel lonelier when you have no one to talk to despite having hundreds of friends on Facebook.
Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo. Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo.
I don't understand this.
Trying to escape from loneliness iscan make you feel lonelier, because it confirms your anxiety over lonelinessfear of being alone.
Trying to escape loneliness can make you feel lonelier, because it confirms your fear of being alone.
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Very good understanding of the subtleties.
Lonelier Than Being Lonely
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you will bare alone because you will bare the only one there.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you are alone because you are the only one there.
Are fits better it makes the sentence more natural sounding
However, when you follow athe same path as everyone goes,else; you will still feel lonely because it i’s not where you belong to.
However, when you follow the same path as everyone else; you will still feel lonely because it’s not where you belong.
Adding when you follow the same path as everyone else makes the sentence clearer
When you feel at peaceful being alone, you are in reality not lonely; when you feel alonehowever when your in thea crowd, you are of people you don’t know it can feel lonely.
When you feel at peace being alone you are in reality not lonely; however when your in a crowd of people you don’t know it can feel lonely.
This makes the sentence flow better
Being lonely is not really being lonely because it is your status quo. Being lonely is not really being lonely because it is your status quo.
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Trying to escape from your loneliness makes you feel more isolated because it fuels your anxiety
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Lonelier Than 'Being' is implied with 'Lonely'. What you have isn't wrong, but this was is more idiomatic and it's a catchy title. 'Lonelier than Alone' is what your journal entry is actually about. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Being alone doesn't necessarily mean being lonely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When you choose a path no one else chooses, you will be alone because you will be the only one there.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you Are fits better it makes the sentence more natural sounding
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you Choose is present tense, so it makes sense to say 'are'. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, when you follow a path everyone goes, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong to.
However, when you follow Adding when you follow the same path as everyone else makes the sentence clearer
However, when you follow a path that everyone You are assuming here that the person isn't like others? Better to say 'may feel', because it's not true of all.
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However, when you follow a path everyone goes, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong |
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When you feel peaceful being alone, you are not lonely; when you feel alone in the crowd, you are lonely.
When you feel at peace This makes the sentence flow better This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You may feel lonely when you are single, but you will feel lonelier when you are unloved in a relationship. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You may feel lonely when you have only a few friends, but you will feel lonelier when you have no one to talk to despite having hundreds of friends on Facebook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo. Being lonely is not really being lonely because it is your status quo. Being lonely is not really being lonely because it is your status quo. Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo. Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo. I don't understand this. |
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Trying to escape from loneliness is lonelier because it confirms your anxiety over loneliness.
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