Oct. 12, 2020
Fly?
So, we can’t go anywhere.
Hotel, tourists industrial and Airline Company is the no.1 victims.
I already mention that as a local, I can pay a cheap price to rent a hotel.
I also mention China is building a famous Japanese street to make the fan feel like in Japan.
Now the airline company!
Some airline company offering a trip that will take off and fly in the air for some hours then back to same airport.
When I hear such offer, I laugh immediately.
Who would stupid enough to take flight?
Well, all the tickets sold out almost immediately.
Some years later when we our son look back what had happened today.
They may laugh till one cries.
So, we can’t go anywhere.
Hotel, tourists industrial and Airline Company isare the no.1 victims.
I also mention that China is building a famous Japanese street to make the fan feel like in Japan.
Now for the airline company!
Some airline company is offering a trip that will take off and fly in the air for some hours then back to the same airport.
Who would be stupid enough to take that flight?
Well, all the tickets were sold out almost immediately.
Some years later when we our sons look back at what had happened today.
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I'd say it's a bit fragmented and some parts sound odd, but overall it's a good text. Keep on practicing!
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Fly? |
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So, we can’t go anywhere. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hotel, tourists industrial and Airline Company is the no.1 victims. Hotel, tourists industrial and Airline Company |
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I already mention that as a local, I can pay a cheap price to rent a hotel. |
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I also mention China is building a famous Japanese street to make the fan feel like in Japan. I also mention that China is building a famous Japanese street to make the fan feel like in Japan. |
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Now the airline company! Now for the airline company! |
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Some airline company offering a trip that will take off and fly in the air for some hours then back to same airport. Some airline company is offering a trip that will take off and fly in the air for some hours then back to the same airport. |
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When I hear such offer, I laugh immediately. |
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Who would stupid enough to take flight? Who would be stupid enough to take that flight? |
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Well, all the tickets sold out almost immediately. Well, all the tickets were sold out almost immediately. |
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Some years later when we our son look back what had happened today. Some years later when |
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They may laugh till one cries. |
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