March 5, 2024
Flowers
I picked up two branches of flowers on my hiking way last Saturday.
One was camellia, and the other one was magnolia. The camellias were cut to keep the plant's shape and fell to the ground in front of a temple, while the magnolia branch was chopped for the road's safety because there was a big freezing rain a few days ago and it was broken in the branches.
It was lucky for me to meet them and bring them home. The camellias are blooming this morning and they make my day!
Although I almost explained to everyone I met on the hiking road that I'd picked them up, not broken the trees to get them. And it was a little inconvenient carrying them all the way, I'm still happy to have them.
花儿
上星期六的徒步路上，我捡了两枝花儿。
一枝是山茶，另一枝是木兰。山茶花是被主人家修剪，落在寺庙前的地上。而玉兰枝儿，是为了道路的安全而被砍掉的，因为前几天有冻雨，它的枝桠被折断了。
幸运的是我遇到了它们，还带回了家。今天早上山茶花开了，看着就身心愉悦!
尽管我在徒步路上解释了一路，我是从地上捡来的花，不是从树上摘的。一路上带着它们也有点不方便，但我还是好高兴。
I picked up two branches of flowers on mywhile hiking way last Saturday.
One was a camellia, and the other one was a magnolia.
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The camellias are blooming this morning and they makde my day!
Although I almost explained to everyone I met on the hiking roadute that I'd picked them up, not broken the trees to get them from the floor and not broken them off the trees.
'I almost explained' would mean you wanted to tell everyone but didn't, 'I explained to almost everyone' would mean that you did tell most people.
And iIt was a little inconvenient carrying them all the way, home but I'm still happy to have them.
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Amazing writing!
March 6, 2024
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
Flowers
I picked up two branches of flowers on my hiking waye last Saturday.
One was a camellia, and the other one was a magnolia.
The camellias were cut to keep the plant's shape and the branches fell to the ground in front of a temple, while the magnolia branch was chopped for the road's safetysafety of the road, because there was a big freezing rain a few days ago and it was broken in the branches.
It was lucky for me to meetfind them and bring them home.
The camellias are blooming this morning and ithey makde my day!
Although I almost explained to almost everyone I met on the hiking roa, that I found them on my hike , and that I' had picked them up, not brokenand not finding the broken branches from the trees to get them.
And it was a little inconvenient carrying them all the way, I'm still happy to have them.
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Nice text, I would love to see the pictures of them!
March 5, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
I put some pictures on X:https://twitter.com/myplain_/status/1764945497394180372
Hope you like them too:)
Flowers
I picked up two braunches of flowers on my hiking waye last Saturday.
One was camellia, and the other (one) was magnolia.
The camellias were cut to keep the plant's shapehad been pruned and fell to the ground in front of a temple, while the magnolia branch was choppedut off for the road's safety because there was a big freezing rain a few days ago and it was broken in the branches were broken.
It was lucky for me to meetLuckily I came across them and bringought them home.
Luckily I came across them and brought them home.
The camellias are blooming this morning and they make my day!
March 5, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Flowers
I picked up two branches of flowers on my hiking way[along the way while hiking | during my hike] last Saturday.
One was camellia, and the other (one) was magnolia.
The second “one” isn’t necessary, but it’s also not wrong.
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[It was lucky for me to meet| I was lucky] to happen upon them and bring them home.
We don’t usually “meet” inanimate objects.
The camellias are blooming this morning and they make my day!
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Merge this sentence with the next.
A…and it was a little inconvenient carrying them all the way, I'm still happy to have them.
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Well done.
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