March 21, 2020
Flowers
Flowers may have been the oldest jewelry. We picked some wild flowers from the side of the road, and made flower crowns, flower necklaces. We rolled a flower around finger, and probably let it be a ring. Flowers are motife of decorating wemen.
花は最も古いジュエリーだったかもしれない。私たちは野に咲く花を摘み、花かんむりやネックレスを作りました。一輪の花を指に巻き、指輪としたこともあったかもしれません。花は女性を飾り立てるモチーフです。
Flowers
Flowers may have been the oldestfirst form of jewelry.
We rollwrapped a flower around one of our finger,s and probably let it became a ring.
Flowers are motife of decorating wemenmake the perfect accessory.
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I agree!
March 21, 2020
Thank you for correcting my sentences^_^ I think flowers are beautiful.
March 22, 2020
We picked some wild flowers from the side of the road and made flower crowns and flower necklaces. We rolled flowers around our fingers and imagined they were rings. Flowers are feminine motifs.
March 23, 2020
Thank you Angela^_^
I will use your sentences as reference.
Flowers
Flowers may have been the oldest jewelry.
We picked some wild flowers from the side of the road, and mademaking flower crowns, and flower necklaces out of them.
This reads better! Most importantly in English you should finish the last item in a list with "... and this." e.g. "this, this and that" but "this, this, that" does not make so much sense.
We rolled a flower around one finger, and probably let it be a ring.
March 21, 2020
Thank you for correcting my mistakes in English.^_^ i’ll do my best!
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We picked some wild flowers from the side of the road, and made flower crowns, flower necklaces. We picked some wild flowers from the side of the road, This reads better! Most importantly in English you should finish the last item in a list with "... and this." e.g. "this, this and that" but "this, this, that" does not make so much sense. |
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We rolled a flower around finger, and probably let it be a ring. We rolled a flower around one finger, and probably let it be a ring. We |
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Flowers are motife of decorating wemen. Flowers |
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