Flowers and Birds on my Windowsill Garden

Finally, I haI've finally uploaded another video about the birds onwho visit my windowsill garden: https://youtu.be/CLzJtAjCrCg.

I've changed "on" to "who visit" because on doesn't sound quite right to me. Windowsill garden feels more like it should follow the preposition rules for garden than for window, but "in" also sounds weird. So i want to avoid the trouble entirely.

It's too difficult to capture the birds because they are too smart.

Often, when I set my camera towards the spot where they eate grass in my windowsill garden, they wouldn't appear for the whole day.

Here "in" sounds fine, but present simple tense works better for "eat".

It lookeds like they not only cwould they notice my camera, but also cthat they would communicate with each other.

I think this wording sounds a bit more natural.

It's just like the name of a TV series, "All Creatures Great and Small ".

I just removed an unnecessary space here.

Finally, I hadve another video about the birds on my windowsill garden:https://youtu.be/CLzJtAjCrCg.

It's too difficult to capturefilm the birds because they are too smart.

Often, whenWhenever I set my camera towards the spot where they eat the grass in my windowsill garden, they wouldn't appear for the whole day.

It lookeds like they not only could notice my camera but also could also communicate with each other.

Flowers and Birds on my Windowsill Garden

Add the plural "-s" to the end of "flower" because I assume you have more than one. If you only have one though, put "a" in front of "flower" (a flower) to correctly conjugate a singular noun.

It's too difficult to capture the birds because they a're too smart.

Nothing's wrong in this sentence, it's just a small nitpick. Contract "there" and "are" into "they're" to make yourself sound more natural.

Often, when I set my camera towards the spot where they eate grass in my windowsill garden, they wouldn't appear for the whole day.

Change "ate" to its present simple tense "eat". You should do this because "ate" is the past simple tense and implies that the birds ate in the past but don't eat anymore which is incorrect.

Flower and Birds on my Windowsill Garden Box.

Finally, I hmade another video about birds on my windowsill garden: box: https://youtu.be/CLzJtAjCrCg.

It's too difficult to capture the birds because they are too smart.

Often, when I sepoint my camera towards the spot where they eate grass in my windowsill garden, box, they wouldn't appear for the whole day.

It looked like they not only could noticed my camera but also could also communicate with each other.

It's just like the name of a TV series, "All Creatures Great and Small ".