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Flexible Optimism.

Hello! I hope you're doing well, today I want to write about one of my favourite books called "Reality is Broken" by Jane Mc Gonigal.

Thank you for correcting me. You're the best :)

I hope this information will be useful to you.

Note: I want to use American English.

As a plethora of studies said, optimism is benefitial, it improves relationships, learning, attention and it make us happier because it diminish stress and anxiety.

However, a few optimism is harmful as a lot of it.

The thing is that sometimes we overestimate our control over the things.

But there's a solution: we can have a flexible optimism which consist in evaluating constantly our abilities when facing a situation and increasing or decreasing our optimism when we don't have too much control over it.

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Don't look at the text, what were the principal ideas? How can you use it for your daily life?.

Thanks for reading :)

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Hello!

I hope you're doing well, today I want to write about one of my favourite books called "Reality is Broken" by Jane Mc Gonigal.

Thank you for correcting me.

Pause and recall.

Don't look at the text, what were the principal ideas?

Thanks for reading :)

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 5, 2022

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However, a few optimism is harmful as a lot of itit is something that is only good in moderation.

I didn’t really understand but I tried my best, let me know what you wanted to say!

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 5, 2022

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I hope this information will be useful to you.

Note: I want to use American English.

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 3, 2022

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Flexible Optimism.


Flexible Optimism. Flexible Optimism

Hello!


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I hope you're doing well, today I want to write about one of my favourite books called "Reality is Broken" by Jane Mc Gonigal.


I hope you're doing well, today I want to write about one of my favourite books called "Reality is Broken" by Jane Mc Gonigal. I hope you're doing well, today I want to write about one of my favorite books called "Reality is Broken" by Jane McGonigal.

"Favourite" is British English spelling.

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Thank you for correcting me.


Thank you for correcting mey mistakes. Thank you for correcting my mistakes.

Sounds better.

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You're the best :)


You're the best !:) You're the best!:)

Or “You’re the best. :)”

I hope this information will be useful to you.


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I hope this information will be useful to you. I hope this information will be useful to you.

Or: “I hope you find this information useful.”

Note: I want to use American English.


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Note: I want to use American English. Note: I want to use American English.

Or, more natural: “Note: I am aiming for the American English dialect.”

As a plethora of studies said, optimism is benefitial, it improves relationships, learning, attention and it make us happier because it diminish stress and anxiety.


As a plethora of studies have said, optimism is benefitcial, i. It improves relationships, learning, and attention, and it makes us happier because it diminishes stress and anxiety. As a plethora of studies have said, optimism is beneficial. It improves relationships, learning, and attention, and it makes us happier because it diminishes stress and anxiety.

Needs to be split into two sentences. For the list of things it does, you have two main things: "improving" and "making us happier". And improving is split into three things: "relationships, learning, and attention". So you need both and's, and separate the two main things with a comma to make it easier to understand.

As a plethora of studies saihave said/reported, optimism is benefitcial,; it improves relationships, learning, attention span and it make us happier because it also diminishes stress and anxiety. As a plethora of studies have said/reported, optimism is beneficial; it improves relationships, learning, attention span and make us happier because it also diminishes stress and anxiety.

However, a few optimism is harmful as a lot of it.


However, a fewtoo much optimism is as harmful as a lot of ittoo little. However, too much optimism is as harmful as too little.

I'm guessing you mean this to be the other way around.

However, a few optimism is harmful as a lot of itit is something that is only good in moderation. However, it is something that is only good in moderation.

I didn’t really understand but I tried my best, let me know what you wanted to say!

The thing is that sometimes we overestimate our control over the things.


The thing is that sSometimes we overestimate our control over the things. Sometimes we overestimate our control over the things.

"The thing is" is slangy.

The thing is that sometimes we overestimate our control over the(certain) things. The thing is that sometimes we overestimate our control over (certain) things.

But there's a solution: we can have a flexible optimism which consist in evaluating constantly our abilities when facing a situation and increasing or decreasing our optimism when we don't have too much control over it.


But there's a solution: we can have a flexible optimism which consist in evaluating constantlys of constantly evaluating our abilities when facing a situation and increasing or decreasing our optimism when we don't have too much control over it. But there's a solution: we can have a flexible optimism which consists of constantly evaluating our abilities when facing a situation and increasing or decreasing our optimism when we don't have too much control over it.

I'm not completely sure what this sentence means.

But there's a solution: we can, instead, strive to have a flexible optimism which consist in evaluating constantlys of constantly evaluating our abilities when facing a (new/particular/specific) situation, and choosing to either increasinge or decreasinge our optimism when it is something we don't have too much control over it. But there's a solution: we can, instead, strive to have flexible optimism which consists of constantly evaluating our abilities when facing a (new/particular/specific) situation, and choosing to either increase or decrease our optimism when it is something we dont have too much control over.

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Don't look at the text, what were the principal ideas?


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How can you use it for your daily life?.


How can you use it forin your daily life?. How can you use it in your daily life?.

How can you use it forthese ideas in your daily life?. How can you use these ideas in your daily life?

More natural!

Thanks for reading :)


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