Dec. 28, 2020
Sleep
I either sleep eleven hours or five hours. If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six. My body feels like that's been enough sleep, but I hate that because I love sleeping so much. There's days where I have insomnia and can't sleep until six or seven in the morning. Yesterday was one of those days and I'm very tired now. And that's why this journal is so short.
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I either sleep eleven hours or five hours.
I either sleep eleven or five hours.
If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six AM. If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six AM.
My body feels like that's beenit has had enough sleep, but I hate thatwaking up so early because I love sleeping so much.
My body feels like it has had enough sleep, but I hate waking up so early because I love sleeping so much.
There's day are nights wheren I have insomnia and can't fall asleep until six or seven in the morning.
There are nights when I have insomnia and can't fall asleep until six or seven in the morning.
Yesterday was one of those days and I'm very tired now.
And that's why this journal is so short.
Sleep
I either sleep for eleven hours or five hours. I either sleep for eleven hours or five hours.
If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six.
My body feels like that's been enough sleep, but I hate that because I love sleeping so much.
My body feels like that's enough sleep, but I hate that because I love sleeping so much.
There's are days where I have insomnia and can't sleep until six or seven in the morning.
There are days where I have insomnia and can't sleep until six or seven in the morning.
I think "There's days" is okay. But "days" is plural, and some people therefore think "There are days" is better.
YesterToday was one of those days and I'm very tired now.
Today was one of those days and I'm very tired now.
"Yesterday was one of those days" sounds like yesterday morning (not this morning), you had trouble sleeping. I feel it'd be better to rephrase: "This was the problem I had this morning, and I'm very tired now."
And that's why this journal entry is so short. And that's why this journal entry is so short.
I either sleep eleven hours or five hours.
I either sleep eleven or five hours.
If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six.
My body feels like that's been enough sleep, but I hate that because I love sleeping so much.
My body feels like that's enough sleep, but I hate that because I love sleeping so much.
There's days where I have insomnia and can't sleep until six or seven in the morning.
Yesterday was one of those days and I'm very tired now.,
Yesterday was one of those days and I'm very tired now,
Aand that's why this journal is so short.
and that's why this journal is so short.
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I either sleep eleven hours or five hours.
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If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six AM. If I sleep five hours, I usually wake up at six AM. |
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My body feels like that's been enough sleep, but I hate that because I love sleeping so much.
My body feels like that's
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There's days where I have insomnia and can't sleep until six or seven in the morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
There I think "There's days" is okay. But "days" is plural, and some people therefore think "There are days" is better.
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Yesterday was one of those days and I'm very tired now.
Yesterday was one of those days and I'm very tired now
"Yesterday was one of those days" sounds like yesterday morning (not this morning), you had trouble sleeping. I feel it'd be better to rephrase: "This was the problem I had this morning, and I'm very tired now." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And that's why this journal is so short.
And that's why this journal entry is so short. And that's why this journal entry is so short. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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