Half a years w has gone by! Half a year has gone by!

Half a years w has gone by! Half a year has gone by!

Happy moments: Happy moments:

Instead of using exercise to reduce weight, I tried the “eating less” method, and it works! Instead of using exercise to reduce weight, I tried the “eating less” method, and it works!

Instead using exercise to reduce weight,of trying to lose weight by just exercising, I tried the “eat less” method and it works! Instead of trying to lose weight by just exercising, I tried the “eat less” method and it works!

"I tried the 'eat less' method" sounds a little strange, but it could be okay depending on what you want to emphasize. I would probably say something like, "I tried dieting and eating less and it works!"

But I still want to exercise for many other reasons. But I still want to exercise for many other reasons.

Would be good to give a couple of the reasons here. This sentence sounds pretty vague.

My part -time job's salary is more than the formmy official job's. My part-time job's salary is more than my official job's.

My part time job salary is more than the formalmy full time job. My part time job salary is more than my full time job.

Formal job could be okay as well, but full time job is how we would usually say it.

Thanks to the virus in April, my formofficial job's schedule wasbecame work for 4 days and, then rest for 4 days. Thanks to the virus in April, my official job's schedule became work for 4 days, then rest for 4 days.

Thanks toBecause of the virus in April my formal job schedule was work 4 days on and rest 4 days off. Because of the virus in April my formal job schedule was work 4 days on and 4 days off.

In allDuring the rest days, I go to working for my part -time job. During the rest days, I work for my part-time job.

IOn all the restmy off days I go to working forwork my part time job. On all my off days I work my part time job.

My pay cheque for April was like a double and mormore than double! My pay cheque for April was like more than double!

Unhappy moments: Unhappy moments:

Focusing issues! Focusing issues!

I want to be good at A, B, C, and many other hobbies. I want to be good at A, B, C, and many other hobbies.

I become a human octopus gotwith 8 soft and weak handlimbs. I become a human octopus with 8 soft and weak limbs.

But all we need is just one big gun! But all we need is just one big gun!

The grammar is fine, but I don't understand the meaning or if it's supposed to be a continuation of the previous sentence?