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alexwong2164

Oct. 15, 2020

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Fixing my bicycle

I brought a second hand bicycle for more than half year.

Over the last six months there are few small problems happened to the bicycle.

But I am just too lazy to take care of it.

Finally, today I suddenly got the strength to fix most of the problems.

1 PSI vs Bra
Even I own a bicycle but I never know what is “PSI” or “Bra”.

After I watched a You Tube video.

Actually this number is on the tires already.

Now, I know what PSI/Bra I should pump into this bicycle.

2 Lamp

The battery was drain out more than 2 month time.

The price is cheap usually I will buy a new and replace it.

But I change the battery and the cost is even less.

I think my bicycle will love me more now.

Corrections

Fixing mMy bBicycle

I brought a second hand bicycle for more than half a year ago.

You can also replace secondhand with used

But I am just too lazy to take care of it.

Finally, today I suddenly got the strengthhad enough motivation to fix most of the problems.

1 PSI vs Bra

AfterSo, I watched a You Tube video.

Actually this number is present on the tires already.

The price is cheap usually cheap, so I will buy a new one and replace it.

Feedback

I'm definitely sure your bicycle will love you after this! Maybe even give it a nice clean so it looks and rides like new.

I'm not able to correct all of the sentences, so I hope another user will.

Good job!

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alexwong2164

Oct. 16, 2020

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excellent help, thanks

Fixing my bicycle


Fixing mMy bBicycle

I brought a second hand bicycle for more than half year.


I brought a second hand bicycle for more than half a year ago.

You can also replace secondhand with used

Over the last six months there are few small problems happened to the bicycle.


But I am just too lazy to take care of it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, today I suddenly got the strength to fix most of the problems.


Finally, today I suddenly got the strengthhad enough motivation to fix most of the problems.

1 PSI vs Bra


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even I own a bicycle but I never know what is “PSI” or “Bra”.


After I watched a You Tube video.


AfterSo, I watched a You Tube video.

Actually this number is on the tires already.


Actually this number is present on the tires already.

Now, I know what PSI/Bra I should pump into this bicycle.


2 Lamp


The battery was drain out more than 2 month time.


The price is cheap usually I will buy a new and replace it.


The price is cheap usually cheap, so I will buy a new one and replace it.

But I change the battery and the cost is even less.


I think my bicycle will love me more now.


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