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Z23

Dec. 16, 2025

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Hello, I just register and I want to improve my English. I'm not sure about my level, I suppose it's around B1.
I'm French native user.
I read some of your histories before sending mine. It's quite fun.
I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dream.

Corrections

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

Grammar: “I just register” → should be “I just registered.”

I'm Frencha native usFrench speaker.

Word choice: “French native user” → more natural is “I’m a native French speaker.”

I read some of your histories before sending mine.

I'll would like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dream.

Sentence structure: “I’ll like to be level C2 next week” → better: “I would like to reach C2 level…”

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Z23

yesterday

3

Thx

First try

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

'Register' should be in the past tense, as it is a completed action

I'm not sure about my level, I suppose it's around B1.

I'm a French native user.

Need to use 'a' - could also say "I'm a native French speaker" or "I'm a native user of French" or "I'm a native speaker of French" - I'm not sure that we 'use' language (in English)

I read some of your histories before sending mine.

I think you might mean 'stories' or 'posts' - histories in French would be (I think! I used Google Translate) the same as "histoires"

It's quite fun.

I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dreamlong shot.

colloquialism - "long shot" is something that might be impossible to achieve

Feedback

Really nice! I hope these comments are helpful (and easy to understand)

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Z23

yesterday

3

Thx. Your comments are very helpful.

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

I'm not sure about my level,; I suppose it's around B1.

I'm Frencha native usFrench speaker.

I'm not exactly sure if this is exactly what you meant to say.

I read some of your histories before sending mine.

It' was quite fun.

Or you could also say "they were quite fun," if you meant the stories themselves rather than the experience.

I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dreamunrealistic.

This isn't a natural expression. You could just say that's it's "unrealistic" or "impossible"--or, if you want to say that something you desire is both unrealistic and maybe even a little crazy, you can say it's "a pipe dream."

Feedback

Great! Keep up the good work, and good luck.

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Z23

yesterday

3

Thx

First try

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

I'm Frencha native userspeaker of French.

I read some of your historiejournals before sendwriting mine.

It's quite fun.

I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dream.

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Z23

yesterday

3

Thanks

First try


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Hello, I just register and I want to improve my English.


Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

'Register' should be in the past tense, as it is a completed action

Hello, I just registered and I want to improve my English.

Grammar: “I just register” → should be “I just registered.”

I'm not sure about my level, I suppose it's around B1.


I'm not sure about my level,; I suppose it's around B1.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm French native user.


I'm Frencha native userspeaker of French.

I'm Frencha native usFrench speaker.

I'm not exactly sure if this is exactly what you meant to say.

I'm a French native user.

Need to use 'a' - could also say "I'm a native French speaker" or "I'm a native user of French" or "I'm a native speaker of French" - I'm not sure that we 'use' language (in English)

I'm Frencha native usFrench speaker.

Word choice: “French native user” → more natural is “I’m a native French speaker.”

I read some of your histories before sending mine.


I read some of your historiejournals before sendwriting mine.

I read some of your histories before sending mine.

I read some of your histories before sending mine.

I think you might mean 'stories' or 'posts' - histories in French would be (I think! I used Google Translate) the same as "histoires"

I read some of your histories before sending mine.

It's quite fun.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It' was quite fun.

Or you could also say "they were quite fun," if you meant the stories themselves rather than the experience.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dreamunrealistic.

This isn't a natural expression. You could just say that's it's "unrealistic" or "impossible"--or, if you want to say that something you desire is both unrealistic and maybe even a little crazy, you can say it's "a pipe dream."

I'll like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dreamlong shot.

colloquialism - "long shot" is something that might be impossible to achieve

I'll would like to be level C2 next week but I know it's a sweet dream.

Sentence structure: “I’ll like to be level C2 next week” → better: “I would like to reach C2 level…”

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