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irene97

Sept. 3, 2023

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First Time Writing in LangCorrect

Hi, this is my first journal narration on here.

I wanted to learn writing in english better, so I search on google how to improve my writing skill better and I came across this website. I hope I can start writing regularly and improve my writing. Feel free to correct me, I am here to learn.

Today is Sunday, a relaxing day for me. I woke up at 6 am and then went for a morning run about 3 km. After that there was zoom meeting for 2 hours. Then I open my calendar to schedule my weeks. Take a nap for 1 hours, than had lunch. While eating my lunch, I watched this youtube video. The video is about how we can stick to our schedule better, by making a environmental cue. I think that's all for today, see you next time. Bye

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First Time Writing ion LangCorrect

Hi, this is my first journal narration onentry here.

I wanted to learn to writinge better in eEnglish better, so I search on googled how to improve my writing skill betteron Google and I came across this website.

you can also informally use the verb "googled" instead of "searched on Google"

I hope I can start writing regularly and improve my writing.

Feel free to correct me, I am here to learn.

Today is Sunday, a relaxing day for me.

I woke up at 6 am and then went for a morning run (about 3 km).

You could say "an approximately 3 km long morning run" but that phrasing feels awkward to me

After that there was zoom meeting for 2 hours, I had a 2 hour long Zoom meeting.

Then I opened my calendar to schedule my weeksprepare next week's schedule.

It is unclear if you're scheduling the next week, or the next few weeks?

TakeI took a nap for 1 hours, thaen had lunch.

While eating my lunch, I watched this ya YoutTube video.

The video iwas about how we can stick to our schedule better, by making an environmental cue.

I think that's all for today, see you next time.

Bye

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Great work on your first entry :)

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irene97

Sept. 3, 2023

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Hi, thank you very much for correcting my first entry. :))

Then I open my calendar to schedule my weeks.


Then I opened my calendar to schedule my weeksprepare next week's schedule.

It is unclear if you're scheduling the next week, or the next few weeks?

Take a nap for 1 hours, than had lunch.


TakeI took a nap for 1 hours, thaen had lunch.

While eating my lunch, I watched this youtube video.


While eating my lunch, I watched this ya YoutTube video.

First Time Writing in LangCorrect


First Time Writing ion LangCorrect

Hi, this is my first journal narration on here.


Hi, this is my first journal narration onentry here.

I wanted to learn writing in english better, so I search on google how to improve my writing skill better and I came across this website.


I wanted to learn to writinge better in eEnglish better, so I search on googled how to improve my writing skill betteron Google and I came across this website.

you can also informally use the verb "googled" instead of "searched on Google"

I hope I can start writing regularly and improve my writing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Feel free to correct me, I am here to learn.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is Sunday, a relaxing day for me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I woke up at 6 am and then went for a morning run about 3 km.


I woke up at 6 am and then went for a morning run (about 3 km).

You could say "an approximately 3 km long morning run" but that phrasing feels awkward to me

After that there was zoom meeting for 2 hours.


After that there was zoom meeting for 2 hours, I had a 2 hour long Zoom meeting.

The video is about how we can stick to our schedule better, by making a environmental cue.


The video iwas about how we can stick to our schedule better, by making an environmental cue.

I think that's all for today, see you next time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Bye


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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