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chansol12

Aug. 3, 2025

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I'm 20 years old. I have dropped out of Korean marine university . so I'm preparing to go another university this year.
I have to take an exam called university math test this year. when I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation. I want to major in nursing because I dream is to go abroad and work in there. Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get visa. I hope everything goes well this year and the same for you.


나는 20살이다. 나는 한국해양대를 자퇴했다. 그래서 나는 올해 다른 대학에 가기 위해 준비중이다. 나는 올해 대수능(대학수학능력시험)이라고 불리는 시험을 쳐야한다. 내가 KMU ( korean marine university) 에 있었을때 내 전공은 항해학이였다. 나의 꿈은 해외에가서 그곳에서 일을 하는것이기 때문에 간호학을 전공하기를 원한다. 간호학은 해외에가서 비자를 받기에 가장 쉬운 방법이다.
올해 모든 일이 잘 됐으면 좋겠고 여러분도 모두 잘 되길 바란다.

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fFirst tTime wWriting

Titles are capitalised apart from joining words like 'in', 'and', 'of' etc

I have dropped out of the Korean marine university .

sSo I'm preparing to go to another university this year.

Start of sentences start with a capital

I have to take an exam called 'university math test' this year.

put quotes around the name to be clear about what part of the sentence is the name

wWhen I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.

major is the word for specializations of a degree

I want to major in nursing because Imy dream is to go abroad and work in there.

either 'my dream is to ...' or you could write 'I dream to go ....'

Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get a visa.

Feedback

Good job! I hope everything goes well with your studies. Best wishes from another student :)

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fFirst tTime wWriting

I'm 20 years old.

I have dropped out of Korean mMarintime uUniversity .

so I'm preparing to go to another university this year.

I have to take an exam called university math tthe College Scholastic Ability Test this year.

wWhen I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.

I want to major in nursing because Imy dream is to gowork abroad and work in there.

Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get a visa.

I hope everything goes well this year and the same for you.

Feedback

Fantastic! Good luck!

fFirst tTime wWriting

This is the "title case" in English.

I have dropped out of the Korean mMarintime uUniversity .,

"have" is not necessary.

I have to take an exam called university math testthe College Scholastic Ability Test (CSAT) this year.

Easier to understand. I translated the Korean to get the test name.

wWhen I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.

..

I want to major in nursing, because Imy dream is to go abroad and work in there.

Some grammar

Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get a visa.

article

I hope everything goes well this year, and the same for youI wish you all the best.

...

Feedback

I hope you pursue your dream! Nurses are usually well paid and in demand. Learning/improving English will open up many doors for you. Good job on your writing.

first time writing


fFirst tTime wWriting

This is the "title case" in English.

fFirst tTime wWriting

fFirst tTime wWriting

Titles are capitalised apart from joining words like 'in', 'and', 'of' etc

I'm 20 years old.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have dropped out of Korean marine university .


I have dropped out of the Korean mMarintime uUniversity .,

"have" is not necessary.

I have dropped out of Korean mMarintime uUniversity .

I have dropped out of the Korean marine university .

so I'm preparing to go another university this year.


so I'm preparing to go to another university this year.

sSo I'm preparing to go to another university this year.

Start of sentences start with a capital

I have to take an exam called university math test this year.


I have to take an exam called university math testthe College Scholastic Ability Test (CSAT) this year.

Easier to understand. I translated the Korean to get the test name.

I have to take an exam called university math tthe College Scholastic Ability Test this year.

I have to take an exam called 'university math test' this year.

put quotes around the name to be clear about what part of the sentence is the name

when I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.


wWhen I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.

..

wWhen I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.

wWhen I was in KMU, my majority was marine navigation.

major is the word for specializations of a degree

I want to major in nursing because I dream is to go abroad and work in there.


I want to major in nursing, because Imy dream is to go abroad and work in there.

Some grammar

I want to major in nursing because Imy dream is to gowork abroad and work in there.

I want to major in nursing because Imy dream is to go abroad and work in there.

either 'my dream is to ...' or you could write 'I dream to go ....'

Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get visa.


Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get a visa.

article

Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get a visa.

Nursing is the most easy way to go abroad and get a visa.

I hope everything goes well this year and the same for you.


I hope everything goes well this year, and the same for youI wish you all the best.

...

I hope everything goes well this year and the same for you.

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