July 20, 2025
First Time Vote
I came of age in May, my birthday, so I got the right to vote and went to at the first time. I felt a responsibility to participate in politics and had a trigger to think more about Japan's political mechanisms. Recently, the voting rate of young people seems much lower, so I think it leads to an increase if any campaign can gain some merit.
私は5月に誕生日を迎えて成人に達したので選挙権を得て、今日、初めての選挙に行ってきました。政治に参加しているという責任を感じ、日本の政治の仕組みについてより考えるきっかけにもなりました。最近では、若者の投票率が非常に低いようなので、何かメリットのあるキャンペーンがあれば増えるのかなと思います。
First -Time Voter
Alternative: First Time Voting
The first one is describing you, as a voter, and first-time is an adjective for you
The second is describing your experience, voting for the first time
I became of age in May, my birthda legal adult in May, so I got the right to vote and went to atdo so for the first time.
"Coming of age" is very old fashioned in English, we would not typically say this to describe turning 18 (or whatever legal age). That phrase would be used in a romanticized sense.
No need to add "my birthday," it's redundant here.
I felt a responsibility to participate in politics, and had athis triggered me to think more about Japan's political mechanismssystem.
Recently, the voting rate of young people seems to be much lower, so. I think it leads to ancould be increased if any campaign canould gain some merit/interest.
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First Time Vote First Alternative: First Time Voting The first one is describing you, as a voter, and first-time is an adjective for you The second is describing your experience, voting for the first time |
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I came of age in May, my birthday, so I got the right to vote and went to at the first time. I became "Coming of age" is very old fashioned in English, we would not typically say this to describe turning 18 (or whatever legal age). That phrase would be used in a romanticized sense. No need to add "my birthday," it's redundant here. |
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I felt a responsibility to participate in politics and had a trigger to think more about Japan's political mechanisms. I felt a responsibility to participate in politics, and |
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Recently, the voting rate of young people seems much lower, so I think it leads to an increase if any campaign can gain some merit. Recently, the voting rate of young people seems to be much lower |
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