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milkyway

Aug. 19, 2022

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First time post

Hi. I post it first time on this site.
I'm excited.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with nephew today.
I usually win games because my nephew is still little.
I have a wish that my nephew become like to play shogi.
Therefore, I want to drop some games well, but it is quite difficult.
I need some technic to lose games too.


こんにちは。
初めての投稿にワクワクしています。

今日は甥っ子と将棋をしました。
甥っ子はまだ小さいので、普通に対戦すると私が勝ってしまいます。
甥っ子に将棋を好きになってもらいたいので、上手に負けてあげたいのですが、なかなか難しいです。
負けるのにも技術が要ります。

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First time pPost

I post itThis is my first time posting on this site.

I'm excited.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

I have a wish thawant my nephew becometo grow to like to playing shogi.

Therefore, I want to droplose some games well, but it is quite difficult.

I need some technic to lose games tooto learn some tricks to help me lose.

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You are a good uncle!

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milkyway

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

I am post iting for the first time on this site.

I'm excited.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

I have a wish that my nephew bewill come to like to play shogi.

Therefore, I want to droplose some games as well, but it is quite difficult.

I'm not sure that I understood exactly what you were trying to say. When you say "drop," do you mean "lose"?

I need some technicques to lose games too.

Feedback

Nice work!

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milkyway

Aug. 20, 2022

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Therefore, I want to droplose some games as well, but it is quite difficult.

Yes, I mean loose.

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milkyway

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

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kaaren

Aug. 20, 2022

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Yes, I mean loose.

A very common mistake, even for English speakers: the difference between lose and loose! Check it out.

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kaaren

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

My pleasure!

First tTime pPost

or

First Post

We capitalize the first letters of important words in titles.

Hi.

I post itThis is the first time I've posted ton this site.

This sentence is tricky and you came close!

I'm excited.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

楽しそうです!

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

I have a wish that my nephew become like towill come to enjoy playing shogi.

or

I hope that my nephew grows to like playing shogi.

Therefore, I want to drop some games as well, but it is quite difficult.

I need some technicque to lose games, too.

or

I need technique to lose games, too.

Feedback

いい話です。頑張ってね。よく出来ました!

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milkyway

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Hi.

I'm post iting for the first time on this site.

You can also say: "This is my first time posting on this site."

I'm excited.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

I have a wish thatope my nephew becomewill like to playing shogi when he grows up.

Therefore, I want to drop some games welllet him win sometimes, but it is quite difficult.

I need some technica strategy to lose games, too.

Feedback

Hello, welcome to LangCorrect. I enjoyed reading your post. It sounds like you have fun playing Shogi with your nephew. I hope you both can keep playing together. ^.^

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milkyway

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections and comments.

First time post


First tTime pPost

or First Post We capitalize the first letters of important words in titles.

First time pPost

Hi.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I post it first time on this site.


I'm post iting for the first time on this site.

You can also say: "This is my first time posting on this site."

I post itThis is the first time I've posted ton this site.

This sentence is tricky and you came close!

I am post iting for the first time on this site.

I post itThis is my first time posting on this site.

I'm excited.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with nephew today.


I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

楽しそうです!

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

I played shogi (Japanese Chess) with my nephew today.

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.


I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually win games because my nephew is still little.

I have a wish that my nephew become like to play shogi.


I have a wish thatope my nephew becomewill like to playing shogi when he grows up.

I have a wish that my nephew become like towill come to enjoy playing shogi.

or I hope that my nephew grows to like playing shogi.

I have a wish that my nephew bewill come to like to play shogi.

I have a wish thawant my nephew becometo grow to like to playing shogi.

Therefore, I want to drop some games well, but it is quite difficult.


Therefore, I want to drop some games welllet him win sometimes, but it is quite difficult.

Therefore, I want to drop some games as well, but it is quite difficult.

Therefore, I want to droplose some games as well, but it is quite difficult.

I'm not sure that I understood exactly what you were trying to say. When you say "drop," do you mean "lose"?

Therefore, I want to droplose some games well, but it is quite difficult.

I need some technic to lose games too.


I need some technica strategy to lose games, too.

I need some technicque to lose games, too.

or I need technique to lose games, too.

I need some technicques to lose games too.

I need some technic to lose games tooto learn some tricks to help me lose.

初めての投稿にワクワクしています。


今日は甥っ子と将棋をしました。


甥っ子はまだ小さいので、普通に対戦すると私が勝ってしまいます。


甥っ子に将棋を好きになってもらいたいので、上手に負けてあげたいのですが、なかなか難しいです。


負けるのにも技術が要ります。


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