June 14, 2021
First Time and Takeaway
Most shops are still closed sooner, so I could not dine out today. Instead, I dropped by a sushi shop, where before the pandemic many tourists used to come and it was very hard to enter because in many times there were a long queue out of the store. However I just took away unagi-eel sushi.
When I came back to my home, and just after I closed the door, as I looked at my left arm by chance, then I found a big and black mosquito on the skin. This mosquito was the first time in this summer for me. I am liked by mosquitos because I have a blood type more likely to be bitten than other ones of blood. Don't eat me, Mr. and Ms. mosquito.
As I calmed down, I began to eat that sushi. When the package was opened, there was found also Japanese pepper, and sauce. This is as great as that store's popularity. I have to eat other meal for now.
First Time and TakeawayTakeaway and the First Mosquito of the Summer
Most shops are still closed soonerrestaurants still have early closing times, so I could not dine out today.
Instead, I dropped by a sushi shop, where before the pandemic many tourists used to come and ibefore the pandemic. It was very hard to enter because in many times there were a long queue outside of the store.
However I justI took away unagi-eel sushi.
Not sure if you need "however" here
When I came back to my home, and just after I closed the door, as I looked at my left arm by chance, thenre I found a big and black mosquito on the skin.
This mosquito was the first time inmosquito of thise summer for me.
I am liked by mosquitosMosquitos like to bite me because I have athe blood type more likely to be bitten than other ones of bloodthat they like the most.
As I calmed down, I began to eat thate sushi.
When the package wasI opened, there was package I found also Japanese pepper, and sauce.
This is as great as that store's popularity.
What are you comparing here? The sauce to the popularity?
I have to eat other meal for now.
Why do you have to eat another meal and what meal is it?
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Interesting story! Just a bit unclear what you meant by some things
June 18, 2021
I brought other meal to home as well. There were only four pieces of the sushi. So I needed more to eat to fully satisfy myself.
I felt this sushi shop's preparation and attentiveness for guests to eat sushi was great to deserve its store's popularity I've seen before the pandemic by many tourists.
Thank you for reading it and becoming interested in my story.
June 18, 2021
Here are just notes.
・Please don't claim my blood, mosquito Lord.
・Mr. can often become the image of master's degree in a college.
・peck at～ has a negative image. devour is in some cases good word for craving and eating foods.
・sit-down restaurant and stand-up restaurant can be used as nouns.
・lock the door is also possible.
・I happened to look at my left upper arm close to the elbow. (the crease of the elbow)
・happen to do= by chance
・proboscis / a natural biomicroelectromechanical system (BMEMS)
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First Time and Takeaway
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Most shops are still closed sooner, so I could not dine out today. Most |
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Instead, I dropped by a sushi shop, where before the pandemic many tourists used to come and it was very hard to enter because in many times there were a long queue out of the store. Instead, I dropped by a sushi shop, where |
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But I just took away unagi-eel sushi. |
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When I came back to my home, and just after I closed the door, as I looked at my left arm by chance, then I found a big and black mosquito on my skin. |
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This mosquito was the first time in this summer for me. This |
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I am liked by mosquitos because I have a blood type more likely to be bitten than other ones of blood.
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Don't eat me, Mr. and Ms. mosquito. |
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As I calmed down, I began to eat that sushi. As I calmed down, I began to eat th |
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When the package was opened, there was found also Japanese pepper, and sauce. When |
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That is great. |
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I have to eat other meal for now. I have to eat other meal for now. Why do you have to eat another meal and what meal is it? |
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However I just took away unagi-eel sushi.
Not sure if you need "however" here |
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When I came back to my home, and just after I closed the door, as I looked at my left arm by chance, then I found a big and black mosquito on the skin. When I came back |
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This is as great as that store's popularity. This is as great as that store's popularity. What are you comparing here? The sauce to the popularity? |
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