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hello everyone!
it's my first time to write in English and on LangCorrect My name is Yoha and I am learning English and I want to imrove my english, vocabularies, listening, and grammar and confidence I hope to receive help from you guys.

in my free times I enjoy to read, watch movies and listening to music, I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

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First time

hHello everyone!

iIt's my first time to writeing in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English and. I want to improve my eEnglish, vocabulariesy, listening, and grammar and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

It's my first time writing in English on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English. I want to improve my English vocabulary, listening, and grammar and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

iIn my free times I enjoy to reading, watching movies and listening to music,. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

In my free time I enjoy reading, watching movies and listening to music. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

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Welcome to LangCorrect!

hHello everyone!

iIt's my first time to write in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English and I want to imrove my eEnglish, skills like; vocabularies, listening, and grammar and also my confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

iIn my free times I enjoy to reading, watching movies and listening to music, I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

First tTime

hHello everyone!

iIt's my first time to writeing in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English and. I want to improve my eEnglish, vocabulariesy, listening, and grammar, and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

I mainly changed the punctuation to avoid run on sentences.

iIn my free times, I enjoy to reading, watching movies and listening to music,. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

Feedback

Welcome!

Capitalization and punctuation really improve the readability of anyone's writing. Great first post!

First time

hHello everyone!

iIt's my first time to writeing in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English, and I want to improve my eEnglish, vocabulariesy, listening, and grammar, and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

iIn my free times, I enjoy to reading, watching movies, and listening to music,. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

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hello everyone!


hHello everyone!

hHello everyone!

hHello everyone!

hHello everyone!

it's my first time to write in English and on LangCorrect My name is Yoha and I am learning English and I want to imrove my english, vocabularies, listening, and grammar and confidence I hope to receive help from you guys.


iIt's my first time to writeing in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English, and I want to improve my eEnglish, vocabulariesy, listening, and grammar, and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

iIt's my first time to writeing in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English and. I want to improve my eEnglish, vocabulariesy, listening, and grammar, and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

I mainly changed the punctuation to avoid run on sentences.

iIt's my first time to write in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English and I want to imrove my eEnglish, skills like; vocabularies, listening, and grammar and also my confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

iIt's my first time to writeing in English and on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English and. I want to improve my eEnglish, vocabulariesy, listening, and grammar and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

It's my first time writing in English on LangCorrect. My name is Yoha and I am learning English. I want to improve my English vocabulary, listening, and grammar and confidence. I hope to receive help from you guys.

in my free times I enjoy to read, watch movies and listening to music, I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.


iIn my free times, I enjoy to reading, watching movies, and listening to music,. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

iIn my free times, I enjoy to reading, watching movies and listening to music,. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

iIn my free times I enjoy to reading, watching movies and listening to music, I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

iIn my free times I enjoy to reading, watching movies and listening to music,. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

In my free time I enjoy reading, watching movies and listening to music. I hope to write more about it and learn from your corrections.

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