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First step is always stress.

Every time I do something for the first time is stressful even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness. That is the pressure to being perfect from the first step.

So, from now, I determined to stop being stressed and to simply be casual instead. To be plain, this is not a final paper, and here is no supervisor. Above all, I am a beginner at writing artivle in English. It’s natural to make mistakes.

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First step is always stressful.

Every time I do something for the first time is stressful even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness.

While it is not incorrect to say 'pick up' (as in take hold of) the pen, it is more natural to say 'pick' (as in choose) the pen.

That is the pressure to being perfect from the first step.

Above all, I am a beginner at writing artivcle in English.

Just a typo :)

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Excellent!

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Aiden

Dec. 30, 2020

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Every time I do something for the first time is stressful even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness.

Thanks! "More natural"is very helpful for me! Happy new Year!

First step is always stressful.

Every timeWhen I do something for the first time i, it is always stressful e. Even when I'm writeing the first word on a blank notepiece of paper, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness.

That is the pressure of wanting to being perfect from the first step.

So, from now, I am determined to stop being stressedful and toinstead, I will simply try to be casual instead.

Above allFurthermore, I am just a beginner at writing artivle in English.

It’s natural to make mistakes.

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Aiden

Dec. 31, 2020

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Thanks! Happy new year!

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nschafer888

Dec. 31, 2020

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Happy New Year to you too.

First sStep iIs aAlways sStress.ful

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, pronouns, adverbs, etc., are all capitalized.

Every time that I do something for the first time, it is stressful, even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with the perfect color and thickness.

“It is” is normally written/said as “it’s”.

That is the pressure to being perfecof perfection is present from the first step.

So, from now, I’m determined to stop being stressed and to simply be casual instead.

To be plainIn other words, this is not a final paper, and there is no supervisor.

“Is not” is often written/said as “isn’t”.

Abovefter all, I am a beginner at writing artivcles in English.

“I am” is often written as “I’m”.

It’s natural to make mistakes.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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Aiden

Dec. 31, 2020

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Thanks!!

First step is always stress.


First sStep iIs aAlways sStress.ful

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, pronouns, adverbs, etc., are all capitalized.

First step is always stressful.

First step is always stressful.

Every time I do something for the first time is stressful even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness.


Every time that I do something for the first time, it is stressful, even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with the perfect color and thickness.

“It is” is normally written/said as “it’s”.

Every timeWhen I do something for the first time i, it is always stressful e. Even when I'm writeing the first word on a blank notepiece of paper, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness.

Every time I do something for the first time is stressful even when I write the first word on a blank note, I have to pick up the pen with perfect color and thickness.

While it is not incorrect to say 'pick up' (as in take hold of) the pen, it is more natural to say 'pick' (as in choose) the pen.

That is the pressure to being perfect from the first step.


That is the pressure to being perfecof perfection is present from the first step.

That is the pressure of wanting to being perfect from the first step.

That is the pressure to being perfect from the first step.

So, from now, I determined to stop being stressed and to simply be casual instead.


So, from now, I’m determined to stop being stressed and to simply be casual instead.

So, from now, I am determined to stop being stressedful and toinstead, I will simply try to be casual instead.

To be plain, this is not a final paper, and here is no supervisor.


To be plainIn other words, this is not a final paper, and there is no supervisor.

“Is not” is often written/said as “isn’t”.

Above all, I am a beginner at writing artivle in English.


Abovefter all, I am a beginner at writing artivcles in English.

“I am” is often written as “I’m”.

Above allFurthermore, I am just a beginner at writing artivle in English.

Above all, I am a beginner at writing artivcle in English.

Just a typo :)

It’s natural to make mistakes.


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