Nov. 11, 2021
First Snow This Year
Since two days ago, it has been raining.
Today's weather was colder than yesterday, at last, the rain drops turned to snow.
My children were so delight by the first snow this year.
However, the snow came to an end soon, and it rained again.
Whether red and yellow leaves are on the trees, winter is coming.
First Snow This Year
Since two days ago, it has been rainingIt has been raining since two days ago.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, but it sounds more natural to say it in a different order. Another option would be "It has been raining for two days."
Today's weather was colder than yesterday, a's. At last, the rain drops turned to snow.
The second half should be a new sentence.
My children were so delighted by the first snow this year.
However, the snow soon came to an end soon, and it rained again.
Again, this is correct—but in this case it sounds a little bit better to put "soon" earlier in the sentence.
Whether red and yellow leaves are on the trees, winter is coming.
Feedback
Nice work! You're using good spelling and vocabulary, and I like your use of transition words. There were just a few small grammatical mistakes. Some of your sentences are correct, but a native speaker would probably say them differently—but that's normal at a beginning level.
I wasn't completely sure what you meant with your last sentence. I marked it as correct, but is is possible you meant to say "when" instead of "whether"?
Overall, good work on this story!
Nov. 12, 2021
Thank you so much. I want to tell the last sentence that Trees are still in fall but the weather is winter. :)
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First Snow This Year This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since two days ago, it has been raining.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, but it sounds more natural to say it in a different order. Another option would be "It has been raining for two days." |
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Today's weather was colder than yesterday, at last, the rain drops turned to snow. Today's weather was colder than yesterday The second half should be a new sentence. |
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My children were so delight by the first snow this year. My children were so delighted by the first snow this year. |
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However, the snow came to an end soon, and it rained again. However, the snow soon came to an end Again, this is correct—but in this case it sounds a little bit better to put "soon" earlier in the sentence. |
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Whether red and yellow leaves are on the trees, winter is coming. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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