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ozymandias99

July 28, 2022

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First review

I will soon take the TOEFL test. I expect getting good results. That's the reason why I am starting this daily journal. Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about. Hopefully practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I strive for. Feel free to correct me as much as you like. I am excited to improve my writing skills. So let's start, shall we?

Monkeypox

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19. Now that everything seems to go in the right way, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox. WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives. In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge part of humanity. Will we let it happen again? Had the world known earlier about Covid-19, we could have done something about it. The time to stop Monkeypox is now.

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My First review

I will soon take the TOEFL test.

I expect gettingto achieve good results.

That's the reason why I am starting this daily journal.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

Hopefully practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I strive for.

Feel free to correct me as much as you like.

I am excited abouto improveing my writing skills.

So let's start, shall we?

Monkeypox

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19.

Now that everything seems to go in the right wayJust when things are starting to go back to normal, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

This is much more natural

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge part of humanity.

Will we let it happen again?

Had the world known earlier about Covid-19, we could have done something about it.

The time to stop Monkeypox is now.

Feedback

Beautiful !!! You will achieve the results you want great work

I will soon take the TOEFL test.

"test" is redundant, as the T in TOEFL stands for "test" :-)

I expect to getting good results.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information Ithat I've read about.

Feel free to correct me as much as you'd like.

Now that everything seems to be headingo in the right waydirection, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

"heading in the right direction" is the figure of speech you were going for, I think

WHOThe WHO has stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health, since an outbreak spread all over the world.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge part of humanitymany people's lives.

Humanity doesn't really have a life, individual humans do, so this strikes me as a little off. There are many ways you could say this, so I chose one.

Had the world known earlier about Covid-19 earlier, we could have done something about it.

Feedback

Great post, most of my feedback is stylistic. :-) Good luck on the TOEFL!!

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ozymandias99

July 29, 2022

2

Had the world known earlier about Covid-19 earlier, we could have done something about it.

Thank you!!

First review

I will soon take the TOEFL test.

I expect to be getting good results.

That's the reason why I am starting this daily journal.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

Feel free to correct me as much as you like.

I am excited to improve my writing skills.

So let's start, shall we?

Monkeypox

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused byof Covid-19.

Now that everything seems to be go ing the right way, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

The WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

A good habit is to write out acronyms when they're first mentioned:
The World Health Organization (WHO) stated that...

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge partves of humanity.

Will we let it happen again?

Had the world known earlier about Covid-19, we could have done something about it.

The time to stop Monkeypox is now.

I expect getting good results.

"I expect to get good results"
"I'm expecting good results"

For both, you can add "and" to the beginning of the sentences - "I will soon take the TOEFL test (and) I expect to get good results)

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

"write about some a interesting information I read about" --> "write about some interesting information I read about"

You do not need to put an "a" before "some interesting information"

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19.

"The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19" --> "The world is still suffering from the aftermath caused by Covid-19"

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

The grammar and spelling seem to be alright, but you are introducing a subject that has not been introduced. When you are going to introduce a subject for the first time (WHO, the World Health Organization), be sure to include that in your sentence.

"The WHO (World Health Organization) stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world"

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.

Monkeypox*
Advancing*

Feedback

Your English writing is great! However, you do have some occasional minor mistakes, which can definitely improve as time passes. Great job and good luck on your test in the future!

I will soon take the TOEFL test.

I expect to getting good results.

That's the reason why I am starting this daily journal.

Everyday, I will write about a somen interesting informationtopic that I read about.

Hopefully, practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I'm striveing for.

Feel free to correct me as much as you like.

I am excited to improve my writing skills.

So let's start, shall we?

Monkeypox

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19.

Now that everything seems to being headingo in the right way, there is a new menace ion the horizon: Monkeypox.

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since andue to the latest outbreak that has spread all overcross the world.

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.

In recent years, we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge partves of humanity.

"a huge part of humanity" sounds strange to me.

Will we let it happen again?

Had the world known earlier about Covid-19, we could have done something about it.

The time to stop Monkeypox is now.

Feedback

Nice work!

First review


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My First review

I will soon take the TOEFL test.


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I will soon take the TOEFL test.

"test" is redundant, as the T in TOEFL stands for "test" :-)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I expect getting good results.


I expect to getting good results.

I expect getting good results.

"I expect to get good results" "I'm expecting good results" For both, you can add "and" to the beginning of the sentences - "I will soon take the TOEFL test (and) I expect to get good results)

I expect to be getting good results.

I expect to getting good results.

I expect gettingto achieve good results.

That's the reason why I am starting this daily journal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.


Everyday, I will write about a somen interesting informationtopic that I read about.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

"write about some a interesting information I read about" --> "write about some interesting information I read about" You do not need to put an "a" before "some interesting information"

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information Ithat I've read about.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

Hopefully practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I strive for.


Hopefully, practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I'm striveing for.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Feel free to correct me as much as you like.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Feel free to correct me as much as you'd like.

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I am excited to improve my writing skills.


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I am excited abouto improveing my writing skills.

So let's start, shall we?


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Monkeypox


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The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19.


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The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19.

"The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19" --> "The world is still suffering from the aftermath caused by Covid-19"

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused byof Covid-19.

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Now that everything seems to go in the right way, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.


Now that everything seems to being headingo in the right way, there is a new menace ion the horizon: Monkeypox.

Now that everything seems to be go ing the right way, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

Now that everything seems to be headingo in the right waydirection, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

"heading in the right direction" is the figure of speech you were going for, I think

Now that everything seems to go in the right wayJust when things are starting to go back to normal, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

This is much more natural

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.


WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since andue to the latest outbreak that has spread all overcross the world.

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

The grammar and spelling seem to be alright, but you are introducing a subject that has not been introduced. When you are going to introduce a subject for the first time (WHO, the World Health Organization), be sure to include that in your sentence. "The WHO (World Health Organization) stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world"

The WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

A good habit is to write out acronyms when they're first mentioned: The World Health Organization (WHO) stated that...

WHOThe WHO has stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health, since an outbreak spread all over the world.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.

Monkeypox* Advancing*

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In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge part of humanity.


In recent years, we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge partves of humanity.

"a huge part of humanity" sounds strange to me.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge partves of humanity.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge part of humanitymany people's lives.

Humanity doesn't really have a life, individual humans do, so this strikes me as a little off. There are many ways you could say this, so I chose one.

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Will we let it happen again?


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Had the world known earlier about Covid-19, we could have done something about it.


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Had the world known earlier about Covid-19 earlier, we could have done something about it.

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The time to stop Monkeypox is now.


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