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LePain

Sept. 16, 2022

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First post in English

Hello and thank you for reading this post. My psedoname is LePain and I've decided to relearn English on this website, which helped me a lot improving my French skill over the past two years.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimes English conversations. This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly : I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammer. Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but always not sure if I'm doing it right.

Thank you for reading until the end, your corrections will be much appreciated!

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First pPost in English

Hello, and thank you for reading this post.

My psedoname is LePain, and I've decided to re-learn English on this website, which. Langcorrect has really helped me a lot improvinge my French skill over the past two years.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimes English conversationson my skills. The work sometimes requires conversing in English.

You can say English twice, but it just sounds less awkward to avoid repeating words.
Avoid run-on sentences.

This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it fromin junior high school), but I've never done it properly :. I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English, but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

Thank you for reading until the end, y. Your corrections will be much appreciated!

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Great job!

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LePain

Sept. 21, 2022

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Thank you very much for your corrections and explanations!

First pPost in English

Hello, and thank you for reading this post.

My pusedorname is LePain, and I've decided to relearn English on this website, which helped me a lot in improving my French skill over the past two years.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometim, which sometimes requires English conversations.

This is not my first time leaning English, (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly :; I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but always not suredoubt if I'm doing it right.

Thank you for reading until the end, y. Your corrections will be much appreciated!

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Great!

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LePain

Sept. 20, 2022

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Thank you I appreciate it a lot !

First post in English

Hello and thank you for reading this post.

My pseudoname is LePain and I've decided to relearn English on this website, which helped me a lot improving my French skills over the past two years.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiringwhich sometimes English conversationsrequires English.

This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly :. I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammer.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

Thank you for reading until the end, your corrections will be much appreciated!

Feedback

Nice work!

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LePain

Sept. 20, 2022

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Thank you very much!

My First pPost in English

Hello and thank you for reading this post.

My pseudoname is LePain and I've decided to relearn English here on this website, which helped me a lot in improving my French skills over the past two years.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimwhich sometimes requires English conversations.

This is not my first time learning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it fromin junior high school), but I've never done it properly : I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

Very nice use of the colon!

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

or

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate in English but I'm not always sure if I'm doing it correctly.

Thank you for reading until the end, y. Your corrections will be much appreciated!

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よく出来ました!

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LePain

Sept. 20, 2022

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ありがとうございます!助かります。

My pusedorname is LePain and I've decided to relearn English on this website, which helped me a lot to improvinge my French skill over the past two years.

I think you were looking for pseudonym, but it's more common to say username when online.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimwork, which sometimes requires English conversations.

This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly :, and I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

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Great work! Very understandable, just a few small errors I've corrected :)

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LePain

Sept. 20, 2022

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I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimwork, which sometimes requires English conversations.

Thank you very much for your corrections ! May I ask you one question ? What is the difference between "work requiring English conversations" and "work which requires English conversations" ?

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cats

Sept. 20, 2022

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in this case we wouldn't say "the work", we'd just say "work". And then with the way the rest of the sentence is constructed, it works to add "which". I don't know the exact grammar concept, sorry! You could also say "I need to brush up my English to work there" or "for work there".

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LePain

Sept. 20, 2022

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Thank you for explaining this in detail. Don't be sorry knowing that the latter doesn't work in this case helps me a lot. Thank you!

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My psedoname is LePain and I've decided to relearn English on this website, which helped me a lot improving my French skill over the past two years.


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My psedoname is LePain, and I've decided to re-learn English on this website, which. Langcorrect has really helped me a lot improvinge my French skill over the past two years.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimes English conversations.


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I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimwhich sometimes requires English conversations.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiringwhich sometimes English conversationsrequires English.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometim, which sometimes requires English conversations.

I currently live in France and will go back to Japan next year, so I need to brush up my English for the work requiring sometimes English conversationson my skills. The work sometimes requires conversing in English.

You can say English twice, but it just sounds less awkward to avoid repeating words. Avoid run-on sentences.

This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly : I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammer.


This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly :, and I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

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Very nice use of the colon!

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This is not my first time leaning English, (as all the Japanese students start learning it from junior high school), but I've never done it properly :; I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

This is not my first time leaning English (as all the Japanese students start learning it fromin junior high school), but I've never done it properly :. I haven't had anyone correct my long texts in termes of grammear.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but always not sure if I'm doing it right.


Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

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Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English but always not suredoubt if I'm doing it right.

Because of this lack of experience, I can communicate myself in English, but I'm not always not sure if I'm doing it right.

Thank you for reading until the end, your corrections will be much appreciated!


Thank you for reading until the end, y. Your corrections will be much appreciated!

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Thank you for reading until the end, y. Your corrections will be much appreciated!

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