June 17, 2022
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I decide to practice English writing skills here every day and hope that a few months ago I can earn some rewards.
Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth. The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, want to trace the truth behind her parent's and a best friend's deaths. The authors describe the story like a movie, with nice music they made playing on each of the chapters. I love the dialogue and the art in this comic. It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and once again. I am so impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.
First post
I have decided to practice my English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months ago I can earn some rewardslevel up my writing.
Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth.
The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, wanould easily identify whether somebody is lying and she uses this gift to trace the truth behind her parent's' and aher best friend's deaths.
The authors describes the story like aas if it was a live-action movie, with nice music they madebeing playinged on each of the chapters.
I love the dialogue and the art in this comic.
It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and onceplot makes me want to read it again and again.
I am sowas really impressed with thise story and expectline/plot and I look forward to read theing its new chapter next week.
June 17, 2022
Many thanks!!!
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I've decided to practice English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months ago I can earn some rewards.I will have made an improvement.
Or you could use the phrase, 'reap my rewards'.
Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth.
The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, want to traceassesses suspects in order to discover the truth behind her parent's and a best friend's deaths.
If you mean one parent, it'd be parent's. If you are talking about the plural it'd be parents'.
The authors describnarrate the story like a movieas if it were a film, with nice music they made playing oin each of the chapters.
I love the dialogue and the art in this comic.
It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and oncemakes me want to read it again and again.
I am sowas impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.
The words 'impressed by a story' aren't used that often. You could try, 'addicted to this...' , 'enraptured' or 'I loved this...' Or you could say you were, impressed by the plot/ quality of the story/ characters/ dialogue. To say impressed by, name something specific you liked.
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June 17, 2022
Thank you so much :)
June 17, 2022
I am sowas impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.
Thanks! That helps a lot
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I decide to practice English writing skills here every day and hope that a few months ago I can earn some rewards. I've decided to practice English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months Or you could use the phrase, 'reap my rewards'. I have decided to practice my English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months |
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Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, want to trace the truth behind her parent's and a best friend's deaths. The story is about a policewoman, who If you mean one parent, it'd be parent's. If you are talking about the plural it'd be parents'. The story is about a policewoman |
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The authors describe the story like a movie, with nice music they made playing on each of the chapters. The authors The author |
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I love the dialogue and the art in this comic. I love the dialogue and This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and once again. It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the |
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I am so impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week. I The words 'impressed by a story' aren't used that often. You could try, 'addicted to this...' , 'enraptured' or 'I loved this...' Or you could say you were, impressed by the plot/ quality of the story/ characters/ dialogue. To say impressed by, name something specific you liked. I |
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