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boneappletea

May 7, 2020

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I woke up at 6am and took a shower. Today is a day a friend will come to my house. I can't wait to meet her and make some food. It's been a while i meet someone and talk with them because of quarantine. I hope me and my friend have a great day today.


오전 6시에 일어나서 샤워를 했다. 오늘은 친구가 우리 집에 오기로 한 날이다. 얼른 그녀를 만나서 음식을 만들고 싶다. 격리 때문에 누군가를 만나서 얘기한 것이 오랜만이다. 나랑 친구가 오늘 즐거운 하루를 보내면 좋겠다.

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Today is a day a friend will come to my house. / Today a friend will come over. / Today a friend will come visit.

To say when something happens, you can just put the time at the beginning or the end of a sentence.
"I exercised this morning."
"Yesterday I made soup."

I can't wait to mseet her and make some food.

"Meet" is correct but "see" sounds more natural. To me, "meet" is more suitable when both people are traveling. "I met my friend at the library." "Meet" is also used when you meet someone for the first time.

IBecause of the quarantine, it's been a while isince I meet someone and talked with them because of quarantine.

All verbs need to be in past tense.

To be honest I'm not sure why I want to put "because of the quarantine" at the beginning of the sentence. I just know it sounds better to me.

I hope me and my friend and I have a great day today.

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Your paragraph was very easy to understand. I hope you and your friend had fun!

First post

I woke up at 6am and took a shower.

Today is a day, a friend will come to my house.

Today indicates that it is a day by itself

I can't wait to mseet her and make her some food.

It's been a while isince I meet someone and talked with them because of quarantine.

I hope me and my friend have a great day today.

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Good work! I hope you had a fun day with your friend :)

First post

I woke up at 6am and took a shower.

Today is a day, a friend will come to my house. / Today, a friend will come over.

I can't wait to mseet her and make some food.

To me at least, saying you can't wait to meet someone sounds like you're meeting for the very first time. Maybe "I can't wait to meet with her" would also be a possible alternative, but I prefer "can't wait to see" here.

IBecause of the quarantine, it's been a while isince I last meet with someone and talked with them because of quarantine.

I hope me and my friend and I have a great day today.

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I woke up at 6am and took a shower.

Today is a day, a friend will come to my house.

"today is a day ..." describes the day itself. examples: "today is a good day", "today is a day unlike any other".
In this sentence, you aren't describing the day, but describing something that will happen during that day.

I can't wait to meet her and make some food.

It's been a while isince I meet someone and talked with them because of the quarantine.

since the quarantine is a specific event happening right now, it's better to call it "the quarantine".
side note: If you were referring to any quarantine ever, you'd call it "a quarantine"

I hope me and my friend and I have a great day today.

This is a very common mistake that even gets made by native English speakers. People will understand you if you say "me and my friend", but it's correct to say "my friend and I"

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Very nice, have fun with your friend today!

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I woke up at 6am and took a shower.


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Today is a day a friend will come to my house.


Today is a day, a friend will come to my house.

"today is a day ..." describes the day itself. examples: "today is a good day", "today is a day unlike any other". In this sentence, you aren't describing the day, but describing something that will happen during that day.

Today is a day, a friend will come to my house. / Today, a friend will come over.

Today is a day, a friend will come to my house.

Today indicates that it is a day by itself

Today is a day a friend will come to my house. / Today a friend will come over. / Today a friend will come visit.

To say when something happens, you can just put the time at the beginning or the end of a sentence. "I exercised this morning." "Yesterday I made soup."

I can't wait to meet her and make some food.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't wait to mseet her and make some food.

To me at least, saying you can't wait to meet someone sounds like you're meeting for the very first time. Maybe "I can't wait to meet with her" would also be a possible alternative, but I prefer "can't wait to see" here.

I can't wait to mseet her and make her some food.

I can't wait to mseet her and make some food.

"Meet" is correct but "see" sounds more natural. To me, "meet" is more suitable when both people are traveling. "I met my friend at the library." "Meet" is also used when you meet someone for the first time.

It's been a while i meet someone and talk with them because of quarantine.


It's been a while isince I meet someone and talked with them because of the quarantine.

since the quarantine is a specific event happening right now, it's better to call it "the quarantine". side note: If you were referring to any quarantine ever, you'd call it "a quarantine"

IBecause of the quarantine, it's been a while isince I last meet with someone and talked with them because of quarantine.

It's been a while isince I meet someone and talked with them because of quarantine.

IBecause of the quarantine, it's been a while isince I meet someone and talked with them because of quarantine.

All verbs need to be in past tense. To be honest I'm not sure why I want to put "because of the quarantine" at the beginning of the sentence. I just know it sounds better to me.

I hope me and my friend have a great day today.


I hope me and my friend and I have a great day today.

This is a very common mistake that even gets made by native English speakers. People will understand you if you say "me and my friend", but it's correct to say "my friend and I"

I hope me and my friend and I have a great day today.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope me and my friend and I have a great day today.

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