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May 23, 2025

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Hello

My name is Victor and I live in Bogota, Colombia. I am Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English. I love the dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, colombian and russian literature and my bible.

Today I went to gym for my first dance class with Leonard instructor. The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to be cardio for decrease my fat porcentage. Then, I was arrived to my house, I took a bath and I prepared my class for fellow students, especifically topics: stechiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Thanks for read me.

Best regards.


Hola

Mi nombre es Victor y vivo en Bogotá, Colombia. Yo soy químico graduado y quiero mejorar rápidamente mi inglés. Amo a los perros y leo artículos de ciencia, filosofía, teología, literatura colombiana y rusa y mi biblia.

Hoy fui al gimnasio para mi primera clase de baile con el instructor Leonardo. La clase fue muy interesante puesto que yo bailé salsa, bachata y reguetón (muy poco) y, por tanto, hice cardio para disminuir mi porcentaje de grasa. Luego, cuándo llegue a mi casa, me bañé y preparé mi clase para algunos estudiantes becarios, específicamente: estequiometría, equilibrio químico y estado de oxidación.

Gracias por leerme.

Saludos cordiales.

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I am a Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English quickly.

I love the dogs, and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, cColombian and rRussian literature, and my bBible.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonard, the instructor.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to bedo cardio forto decrease my fat poercentage.

Then, I was arrived to my house, I tookreached home and had a bath and. I prepared for my class for fellow studentes, especifically topics: stechiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Thanks for read meing.

I am Ca chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English quickly.

I love the dogs, and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, cColombian and rRussian literature, and my bBible.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonard, the instructor.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata, and regugaeton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to bedo cardio forto decrease my fat poercentage.

Then, I was arrived ato my house, I took a bath, and I prepared my class for fellow students, especifically topics: steoichiometry, chemical equilibrium, and oxidation state.

Thanks for read meing my letter.

Hello


My name is Victor and I live in Bogota, Colombia.

I am a Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quicklyquickly improve my English.

I love the dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, theologíay, cColombian and rRussian literature, and my bible.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonardmy instructor, Leonard.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to bedo cardio for decrease mto help reduce my body fat poercentage.

For "reduce body fat percentage" you can also just say "lose weight"

Then, I was arrived to mywhen I went housme, I took a bath and I prepared myfor class forwith my fellow students, especifically stopics: steichiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Using colons for making a list is only appropriate if the part before the colon can be a sentence by itself.
For example
We went to see three mountains: mount everest, K2, and mount baldy.

"We went to see three mountains." Can also be a sentence without the list.

Thanks for reading for me.

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Hello My name is Victor and I live in Bogota, Colombia.

I am Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English.

I am Chemistry graduated and I want to improve my English quickly.

I love the dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, colombian and russian literature and my bible.

I love dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, colombian, russian literature and my bible.

Today I went to gym for my first dance class with Leonard instructor.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonard instructor.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to be cardio for decrease my fat porcentage.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata, and a little reggaeton. Therefore, I was able to do cardio to decrease my body fat percentage.

Then, I was arrived to my house, I took a bath and I prepared my class for fellow students, especifically topics: stechiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Then, I arrived home, took a bath, and prepared my class for my fellow students, specifically on the topics of stoichiometry, chemical equilibrium, and oxidation states.

Thanks for read me.

Thanks for reading.

Best regards.

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Hello My name is Victor and I live in Bogota, Colombia.


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Hello


My name is Victor and I live in Bogota, Colombia.

I am Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English.


I am Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English.

I am Chemistry graduated and I want to improve my English quickly.

I am a Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quicklyquickly improve my English.

I am Ca chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English quickly.

I am a Chemistry graduated and I want to improve quickly my English quickly.

I love the dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, colombian and russian literature and my bible.


I love the dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, colombian and russian literature and my bible.

I love dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, colombian, russian literature and my bible.

I love the dogs and I read science articles, philosophy, theologíay, cColombian and rRussian literature, and my bible.

I love the dogs, and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, cColombian and rRussian literature, and my bBible.

I love the dogs, and I read science articles, philosophy, teología, cColombian and rRussian literature, and my bBible.

Today I went to gym for my first dance class with Leonard instructor.


Today I went to gym for my first dance class with Leonard instructor.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonard instructor.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonardmy instructor, Leonard.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonard, the instructor.

Today I went to the gym for my first dance class with Leonard, the instructor.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to be cardio for decrease my fat porcentage.


The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to be cardio for decrease my fat porcentage.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata, and a little reggaeton. Therefore, I was able to do cardio to decrease my body fat percentage.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to bedo cardio for decrease mto help reduce my body fat poercentage.

For "reduce body fat percentage" you can also just say "lose weight"

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata, and regugaeton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to bedo cardio forto decrease my fat poercentage.

The class was very interesting because I danced salsa, bachata and regueton (very little), and, therefore, I was able to bedo cardio forto decrease my fat poercentage.

Then, I was arrived to my house, I took a bath and I prepared my class for fellow students, especifically topics: stechiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.


Then, I was arrived to my house, I took a bath and I prepared my class for fellow students, especifically topics: stechiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Then, I arrived home, took a bath, and prepared my class for my fellow students, specifically on the topics of stoichiometry, chemical equilibrium, and oxidation states.

Then, I was arrived to mywhen I went housme, I took a bath and I prepared myfor class forwith my fellow students, especifically stopics: steichiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Using colons for making a list is only appropriate if the part before the colon can be a sentence by itself. For example We went to see three mountains: mount everest, K2, and mount baldy. "We went to see three mountains." Can also be a sentence without the list.

Then, I was arrived ato my house, I took a bath, and I prepared my class for fellow students, especifically topics: steoichiometry, chemical equilibrium, and oxidation state.

Then, I was arrived to my house, I tookreached home and had a bath and. I prepared for my class for fellow studentes, especifically topics: stechiometry, chemical equilibrium and oxidation state.

Thanks for read me.


Thanks for read me.

Thanks for reading.

Thanks for reading for me.

Thanks for read meing my letter.

Thanks for read meing.

Best regards.


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