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s_06_2801

Jan. 10, 2022

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First order from Aliexpress

How are you guys? Yesterday I ordered from Aliexpress some items that I needed, like a phone case and some rings. This is the first and maybe the last time I'm ordering something from there, because a lot of people have a negative opinion about Aliexpress. I guess I just have to wait and see for myself what will happen. Don't worry I'll keep you updated for sure. Until then have a nice day and stay safe < 3

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Yesterday I ordered from Aliexpress some items that I needed from Aliexpress, like a phone case and some rings.

This iIt was the first and maybe the last time I'mve orderinged something from there and maybe the last, because a lot of people have a negative opinions about Aliexpress.

What you wrote sounds fine but I think it's more correct to put "I've ordered" after "first time" and then add "maybe the last" later, because that way you aren't confusing the verb tenses

I guess I just have to wait and see for myself what will happen for myself.

What you wrote is correct but in my opinion putting "for myself" at the end sounds more natural

Don't worry, I'll keep you updated for sure.

Until then, have a nice day and stay safe < 3

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Well done!

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s_06_2801

Jan. 15, 2022

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Thank you for the corrections!

First order from Aliexpress


How are you guys?


Yesterday I ordered from Aliexpress some items that I needed, like a phone case and some rings.


Yesterday I ordered from Aliexpress some items that I needed from Aliexpress, like a phone case and some rings.

This is the first and maybe the last time I'm ordering something from there, because a lot of people have a negative opinion about Aliexpress.


This iIt was the first and maybe the last time I'mve orderinged something from there and maybe the last, because a lot of people have a negative opinions about Aliexpress.

What you wrote sounds fine but I think it's more correct to put "I've ordered" after "first time" and then add "maybe the last" later, because that way you aren't confusing the verb tenses

I guess I just have to wait and see for myself what will happen.


I guess I just have to wait and see for myself what will happen for myself.

What you wrote is correct but in my opinion putting "for myself" at the end sounds more natural

Don't worry I'll keep you updated for sure.


Don't worry, I'll keep you updated for sure.

Until then have a nice day and stay safe < 3


Until then, have a nice day and stay safe < 3

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