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Betelgoida

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Hi, dear reader! I wanna improve my writing skill for my exam, and I really appreciate what I found in the Internet - this platform. I will write here a lot of things about me and my life. This note will be about a new beginning.
I already met a lot of people which can't do something new, cause they don't want to start. I ask myself, why? Why a lot of people don't want to lern something different? And the most of answers were fear.
I think it's a first step to dissuade yourself to live. Maybe I am wrong, but i think it's like "syndrom of little duck".
We live in very difficult world, where the horizon of planning is very short for everyone. If you scare something new, its just a sign for you to do something with your life, because if you can break this "wall", i think you can reach the top of the own world :3


Привет, дорогой читатель! Я хочу повысить мои навыки письма для моего экзамена, и я очень ценю то что я нашел в интернете - эту платформу. Я буду писать здесь много вещей о себе и моей жизни. Этот текст будет о новых начинаниях.
Я уже встретил множество людей которые не могут сделать что-то новое, потому что они не хотят начинать. Я спросил себя, почему? Почему множество людей не хотят учиться чему-то иному? И большинство ответов были - страх.
Я думаю это первый шаг к отговариванию себя жить. Может я не прав, но я думаю что это как "синдром утенка".
Мы живем в очень сложном мире, где горизонт планирования очень краток для каждого. Если вы боитесь чего-то нового, это лишь знак для вас сделать что-либо с вашей жизнью, потому что если вы сможете сломать эту "стену", я думаю вы сможете достичь вершины собственного мира :3

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Hi, dear reader!

I wanna improve my writing skill for my exam, and I really appreciate what I found in the Internet - this platform.

"Wanna" is fine in casual conversation, but it will probably not be accepted in an exam! "Want to" is the standard spelling.

I will write here a lot of things about me and my life here.

This note will be about a new beginning.

I already met a lot of people whicho can't do something new, cause they don't want to start.

Again, "cause" is too casual for an exam, "because" is the standard spelling.

I ask myself, why?

Why do a lot of people don'not want to learn something different?

And the most of the answers were fear.

I think it's athe first step to dissuadeing yourself tofrom liveing.

Maybe I am wrong, but iI think it's like "syndrom of little duckthe "Baby Duck Syndrome".

"Syndrome of the little duck" would also be fine grammatically, but it's not what the concept is called in English

We live in very difficult world, where the horizon of planning is very short for everyone.

If you scare afraid of something new, it's just a sign for you to do something with your life, because if you can break this "wall", iI think you can reach the top of theyour own world :3

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Hi, dear reader!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wanna improve my writing skill for my exam, and I really appreciate what I found in the Internet - this platform.


I wanna improve my writing skill for my exam, and I really appreciate what I found in the Internet - this platform.

"Wanna" is fine in casual conversation, but it will probably not be accepted in an exam! "Want to" is the standard spelling.

I will write here a lot of things about me and my life.


I will write here a lot of things about me and my life here.

This note will be about a new beginning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I already met a lot of people which can't do something new, cause they don't want to start.


I already met a lot of people whicho can't do something new, cause they don't want to start.

Again, "cause" is too casual for an exam, "because" is the standard spelling.

I ask myself, why?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why a lot of people don't want to lern something different?


Why do a lot of people don'not want to learn something different?

And the most of answers were fear.


And the most of the answers were fear.

I think it's a first step to dissuade yourself to live.


I think it's athe first step to dissuadeing yourself tofrom liveing.

Maybe I am wrong, but i think it's like "syndrom of little duck".


Maybe I am wrong, but iI think it's like "syndrom of little duckthe "Baby Duck Syndrome".

"Syndrome of the little duck" would also be fine grammatically, but it's not what the concept is called in English

We live in very difficult world, where the horizon of planning is very short for everyone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you scare something new, its just a sign for you to do something with your life, because if you can break this "wall", i think you can reach the top of the own world :3


If you scare afraid of something new, it's just a sign for you to do something with your life, because if you can break this "wall", iI think you can reach the top of theyour own world :3

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