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MaoMaoo

Aug. 30, 2025

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i wanna improve my english skills (grammar, writing, speaking) as a student in order to boost my career development outside my native country, im currently trying to write as long as i can, i also want to improve drastically my technical writing cus im studying an engineering so i must try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles and other stuff like this related to the main topic of technical writing and formal writing

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i wanna improve my english skills, ie (grammar, writing, and speaking), as a student in order to boost my career development outside my native country, i. am currently trying to write things as long as i can,. i also want to improve drastically my technical writing cus imz of studying ain engineering, so i must try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles, and other stuff, like this, related to themy main topic of technical writing and formal writing.

iI wannat to improve my eEnglish skills (grammar, writing, speaking) as a student in order to boost my career development outside of my native country, i. I'm currently trying to write as long as iI can, i. I also want to improve drastically my technical writing cus idrastically because I'm studying to be an engineering so i. Therefore, I must try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles and other stuff like this related to the main topic of technical writingechnical and formal writing.

Fixed some minor word order, added some particles and capitalized where needed. I also broke a few run on sentences apart to flow better. Since you mentioned wanting to improve on technical writing, I changed the words "wanna" and "cus". The way you used them is actually correct, but you would not use them in a formal setting.

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Pretty good start! I'm an electrical engineer myself. I think it's great to want to get better at English, but don't forget to study all that math too! Good luck!

iI wannat to improve my eEnglish skills (grammar, writing, speaking) as a student in order to boost my career development outside my native country, i. I'm currently trying to write for as long as iI can, i. I also want to improve drastically improve my technical writing cbecause im studying an engineering, so i mustI have to try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles, and other stuff like this related to the main topic of technical writing and formal writingformal/technical writing.

Words like "wanna" and "cus"/"cuz" can sound natural/native, but they're very informal (good for text messages in half-sentences, but not much more), so I've replaced them here. "Drastically" is technically correct here but sounds a little funny; something like "significantly" might sound more natural. "Other stuff like that" can also sound natural, but if you're following it with a clarifying phrase like "related to ...," it sounds less awkward if you leave off the "like that" and just say "other stuff related to ..." Hopefully this helps – nice writing on the whole!

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i wanna improve my english skills (grammar, writing, speaking) as a student in order to boost my career development outside my native country, im currently trying to write as long as i can, i also want to improve drastically my technical writing cus im studying an engineering so i must try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles and other stuff like this related to the main topic of technical writing and formal writing


iI wannat to improve my eEnglish skills (grammar, writing, speaking) as a student in order to boost my career development outside my native country, i. I'm currently trying to write for as long as iI can, i. I also want to improve drastically improve my technical writing cbecause im studying an engineering, so i mustI have to try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles, and other stuff like this related to the main topic of technical writing and formal writingformal/technical writing.

Words like "wanna" and "cus"/"cuz" can sound natural/native, but they're very informal (good for text messages in half-sentences, but not much more), so I've replaced them here. "Drastically" is technically correct here but sounds a little funny; something like "significantly" might sound more natural. "Other stuff like that" can also sound natural, but if you're following it with a clarifying phrase like "related to ...," it sounds less awkward if you leave off the "like that" and just say "other stuff related to ..." Hopefully this helps – nice writing on the whole!

iI wannat to improve my eEnglish skills (grammar, writing, speaking) as a student in order to boost my career development outside of my native country, i. I'm currently trying to write as long as iI can, i. I also want to improve drastically my technical writing cus idrastically because I'm studying to be an engineering so i. Therefore, I must try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles and other stuff like this related to the main topic of technical writingechnical and formal writing.

Fixed some minor word order, added some particles and capitalized where needed. I also broke a few run on sentences apart to flow better. Since you mentioned wanting to improve on technical writing, I changed the words "wanna" and "cus". The way you used them is actually correct, but you would not use them in a formal setting.

i wanna improve my english skills, ie (grammar, writing, and speaking), as a student in order to boost my career development outside my native country, i. am currently trying to write things as long as i can,. i also want to improve drastically my technical writing cus imz of studying ain engineering, so i must try my best to get better at sending important emails, writing scientific articles, and other stuff, like this, related to themy main topic of technical writing and formal writing.

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